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Modernity is an unending project

A-Through discoveries
B-Inventions
C-Experiments
D-oberservations
E-Analysis
F-Innovations
G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability
H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability
I-To modifiy to amend
J-To Bring Change To Make New
K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation

K-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036280]Modernity is an unending project

A-Through discoveries
B-Inventions
C-Experiments
D-oberservations
E-Analysis
F-Innovations
G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability
H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability
I-To modifiy to amend
J-To Bring Change To Make New
K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation

K-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT[/QUOTE]Thanks for sharing

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Please comment anyone if it is Correct or Not?😸

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036292]Please comment anyone if it is Correct or Not?😸[/QUOTE]Its would be good if u can elaborate it

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[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036280]Modernity is an unending project



A-Through discoveries

B-Inventions

C-Experiments

D-oberservations

E-Analysis

F-Innovations

G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability

H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability

I-To modifiy to amend

J-To Bring Change To Make New

K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation



K-Thus to Prevent

Inactivity

Outdatness

Wastage

Stagnation



CONCLUSION

MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT[/QUOTE]



Share your thesis statement for thorough feedback. As far as what you have given here is concerned, it seems to the point but it lacks in detail and begs elaboration. How you expanded these points would decide the fate of your essay.

Brothers i just made an outline yet,

Elaborating each point would be tiresome right now,

Anyway few points i may elaborate

Thesis statement
Modernity is an aspect of life,a Requirement of Time and A system created by God,A universal Truth that cant be denied and on which human existence depend

(I consider it appropriate because i consider modernity isnot a Qoute said in context of any movement )


So how Modernity is an unending project?

A-Observation
Whenever we want to Create something we Observe How?why,Where,When The Particular thing Can be Created

Is its creation can be good or not? What,How,Where and When it would be beneficial and dangerous and what,When,Where it would create an impact,Either Its impact would be good or not,If it would be benefical to greater or smaller extent and This process continued with ages
Example
Today the important medicines made based on Observation of Past scientist and process of Observation in feild of medicine and other feilds continued and unending




B-Inventions
Has been made With the Passage of time and is sole proof that modernity is an unending project as it manifest itself today

The reasons of inventions based on
Need,
Requirement of Situation
And to create room for successors to continue to Justify that modernity is an unending project

Hehehehehehe

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Please point out mistakes!!!

If you have attempted this essay in your exam, I would advise you to be modest in your expectations...


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[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1036339]If you have attempted this essay in your exam, I would advise you to be modest in your expectations...


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Ofcourse brother but i didnot appear🙀

Allah kray tyari mukamal ho ga ay mere 2018 tak

Brother tell me is intro and thesis is one thing or separate

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036344]Brother tell me is intro and thesis is one thing or separate[/QUOTE]



Both are separate.

And what should be given first and what is thesis statement?

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036346]And what should be given first and what is thesis statement?[/QUOTE]



Thesis statement is the core of your essay. You prove that statement with your essay. Thesis should address the topic directly. Always identify the essay question, thesis statement is your answer to that question. In turn, your essay is an expansion of your thesis.

Thesis statement (in my opinion) should come at the end of your introductory paragraph.

And was my approach good?

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036349]And was my approach good?[/QUOTE]



No.

Brother please elaborate!!!

Help me brother

Now where he went i m stress now🙀

Zealot

You need to get a full-fledged orientation lecture on essay writing, brother. You seem to have only a vague concept about basic things related to essay. On this forum, I can help with small mistakes or issues. I cannot deliver full lectures. Even if I try to write it all briefly for you, you will be confused.


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Thanks for help brother Agay Allah Malik hai

Brother last thing Have you made thesis headings?
After intro

Have you appeared how much marks you got?

Can you share your outline

Please!!!!

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036372]Thanks for help brother Agay Allah Malik hai



Brother last thing Have you made thesis headings?

After intro



Have you appeared how much marks you got?



Can you share your outline



Please!!!![/QUOTE]



I can share my outline via email. Don't want to share it here.

And yes, I did give headings in my outline. With a marker. But they were not usual one word headings. They were phrases or statements/sentences.

I took CSS 13, 15, and 17. Failed twice. Awaiting 17 result.

Brother i which subject you couldnot make it?

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036378]Brother i which subject you couldnot make it?[/QUOTE]



Essay.

Brother can you send me you all outlines of your Previous exam?

How much marks and

Were you confident that you may pass essay?

And last have you taken any guidence in essay?

My e mail in my profile please send me

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036380]Brother can you send me you all outlines of your Previous exam?[/QUOTE]



I have deleted all of them except 2017 one.

Allah apko kamyab kray (Aameen)

I'm unable to comprehend what you ought to say. Could you brief your point of view with the examples.


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[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036337]Brothers i just made an outline yet,

Elaborating each point would be tiresome right now,

Anyway few points i may elaborate

Thesis statement
Modernity is an aspect of life,a Requirement of Time and A system created by God,A universal Truth that cant be denied and on which human existence depend

(I consider it appropriate because i consider modernity isnot a Qoute said in context of any movement )


So how Modernity is an unending project?

A-Observation
Whenever we want to Create something we Observe How?why,Where,When The Particular thing Can be Created

Is its creation can be good or not? What,How,Where and When it would be beneficial and dangerous and what,When,Where it would create an impact,Either Its impact would be good or not,If it would be benefical to greater or smaller extent and This process continued with ages
Example
Today the important medicines made based on Observation of Past scientist and process of Observation in feild of medicine and other feilds continued and unending




B-Inventions
Has been made With the Passage of time and is sole proof that modernity is an unending project as it manifest itself today

The reasons of inventions based on
Need,
Requirement of Situation
And to create room for successors to continue to Justify that modernity is an unending project

Hehehehehehe

Bus filhal yahen hai meray pass
If you like it please appriciate if not then dont abuse,Scold or make fun of me

Thanks brothers

Please point out mistakes!!![/QUOTE]

Referring to your essay outline, I would like to share my thoughts about it.
Modernity is a world view and it should have been dealt on ideological and ontological grounds. Per question, one needs to identify Modernity as an idea/ideology and its status in the contemporary world. Has it become "an unending project" ? or is there any possibility of its being evaporated/defeated/deconstructed by any other idea/world-view (existing or new) ? It was a philosophical and theoretical proposition asked in the question. In my opinion, you, unfortunately, could not grasp the core/scope of the question. I hope you would consider my criticism in a positive and constructive manner. Thanks

I did attempt the same essay. I briefly remember my outline:

Introduction: Modernity could be an ending project due to natural order of history and its dialectical process

Thesis statement of Modernity: Man is an autonomous rational being.

Brief history and origin of Modernity: Reformation, renaissance, Enlightenment, Romanticism Movements

Display of Modernity as an unending Project:
Concept of Modern State & Hegemonic globalization of Modernity.
Capitalism and economic exploitation of the globe.
Thesis of "The End of History and the Last Man" by Francis Fukuyama

Deconstruction of Modernity: (Referring to the fact that Modernity could be an ending project)
Marxism and its historical materialism.
Deconstruction of Modern Thought and its hegemony..."Specters of Marx" by Jacques Derrida.
Anti-Modernity and anti-Capitalism school of thought...Jean-Paul Sartre, Antonio Gramsci, etc.
Brexit dialect.
USA Elections and its implications.

Conclusion: Modernity is a worldview/ideology. A stronger and popular worldview/idea (new or old) could bring down Modernity. 21st Century events apparently depict the process of ending of the Modernity project. etc.

Brother Would you share you passing marks of this essay after passing ? Please

Looks as if you might have passed CSS exam earlier too what was your score in Essay?

Regarding my essay 😸

Hehehehe i was just practicing Outlines on different topic but never tried to Write fully on any topic 😸

It was when you all told me to write complete essay i started writing straight after css2015 essay😸

Anyway i find my essay in "writing" is not upto the mark

Thanks you brother😸

[QUOTE=lovereflector;1036391]I'm unable to comprehend what you ought to say. Could you brief your point of view with the examples.


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Yeh abhu kisi ko samajh nai a ay ge😸

Modernity is an unending project

**************Because Human************
A-Continuous effort in making discoveries
B-Persistent Endeavour to make Inventions
C-Unending desire to Experiment To Test Something
D-Unrestrained Nature to make oberservations To Prove Something
E-Limitlessness To have Analytical thinking to make Innovations
F-Uncontrolled ability of Creativity To find Reasons
**************ITS IMPACTS***************
G-Thus Modernity is unending project because Human
*Improve to ensure Reliability
*Upgrade to Ensure Stability
*modifiy to amend
*Bring Change To Make New
*Bring Versatility To bring Variation
H-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT


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I choose the word "unending"

My approach of essay
 

I would advise you to tackle the essay in argumentative style that is:

Intro should include:
What is modernity and what do you mean by unending?
What is historical point of view of it?
What is your point on it? (Your thesis statement)

Body should include:
Three points in favor of your thesis along with atleast three examples or illustrations proving them.
Two points negating your opposite point of view.

Conclusion should include same points of intro and end at a positive note.

My brother everyone has its own style,ways,methods,technique,manner,attitude,shape and source of writing i can copy important things and

Appreciate the Criticism...

I waiting for all of your Results,Kindly post your marks

Allah ap sab ko kamyab kray


I note important points that were missing thanks

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036280]Modernity is an unending project

A-Through discoveries
B-Inventions
C-Experiments
D-oberservations
E-Analysis
F-Innovations
G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability
H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability
I-To modifiy to amend
J-To Bring Change To Make New
K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation

K-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT[/QUOTE]
You win here buddy.Excellent.

Thanks brother😸