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Essay Outline for feedback
Fellow aspirants:
I will be happy if you can kindly provide insightful feedback on my outline for the essay "ALL OTHER RIGHTS DEPEND ON RIGHT TO BALLOT" -[START]- QUOTE INTRODUCTION Meaning of voting and its multi-dimensional applications Crucial in a democratic system which further needs to be complied HISTORY a) roman empire: voice of people duly acknowledged b) early islam shurah and concenus c) ottoman empire: advisors from public d) delhi sultanate and moghuls: consultative processs, public complaints etc HISTORY Modern History British Raj, limited franchise absence of voting rights and suppressive laws. stigma on dfreedom Upon public protests new laws to ensure participation to Indian leaders Quotation by QUAID E AZAM Power of masses realized by both Hindu and Muslim leaders PAKISTAN Largest muslim democracy Basic Democracy: Introduced by Ayub Khan (first hope) 1973: democracy level of public 2001: Devolution plan Seats for women and minority in Senate and NA All 18+ constitutionally obliged to cast vote ESSENTIAL FOR CORRECT FUNCTIONING OF STATE All rights emanate from right to vote Effective pillars of state and their correct functionnog is imperative In turns it depends on integrity in political values which marks public mandate as integral VARIOUS ELEMENTS IN DEMOCRACY various roles in shaping public opinion media and social media civil society political parties all must recognze their importance for public good EQUAL and indiscriminate picture must be portrayed INITIATIVES OF ECP Election body in Pakistan ECP: follows the mandate and bright outcomes observed still incidents sof rigging etc to cope ECP must be strengthened and made more transparent and meritocratic ENCOURAGING FACTOR initiatives by the court to scrutnize financial records and educational crednetials repolling in dubious cases relevant apprehensions OTHER ENCOURAGING FACTORS Victory for grassroot democracy gender equality State legislations etc PROBLEMS divide between rich and poor vulnerable segments often neglected positive signs such as increased women turnout and coverage in rural areas further adds to the importance of voting and calls for drastic reforms SUGGESTION FOR IMPROVEMENT majority of candidates are feudals, illetrate money games and horse-trading need of improvement POINTS TO BE BORROWED from western a model where informed debates etc SUGGESTION FOR IMPROVEMENT to make voting efficient and effective social media constructively ideas of social justice being portrayed economic prosperity SUGGESTION FOR IMPROVEMENT type of election system pakistan follows first part the post system according to critics it results in vote bank politics proportional representation must also be included ANOTHER DIMENSION (GLOBAL) voting a right as global citizen international orgs (UN and EU etc) have democratic style north-south divide is prevalent in which more weightage given to the developed countries to counter such injustice new organizations like BRICS bank etc are emerging CONCLUSION voting is imperative for a good governance and socio-economic prosperity more satisfaction in voting process is observed RELEVANT QUOTE -[END]- Thanks a lot! |
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