Evaluate my Essay Outline - Wrote in 28 minutes.
 

Aslamo alikum guys,, I have prepared following outline within 28 minutes for practice purpose. Kindly spare some time to evaluate it according to the relevance to the topic and symmetry in its structure. Thanks

Topic: Terrorism - a new threat to the contemporary world.

[B]1. Introduction[/B]
[B]2. Existing threats to the contemporary world.[/B]
a. Nuclear stockpile.
b. Global Warming.
c. Poverty.
[B]3. Terrorism - a new threat to the contemporary world.[/B]
a. Understanding terrorism.
b. Origins & spread of terrorism.
c. Terrorism sponsorship in the name of counter-ship.
d. Terrorism driven by political objectives
[B]4. How terrorism becomes a threat to contemporary world?[/B]
a. Ideological driven terrorist organization.
b. Unemployment provided recruitment pool to the terrorist organizations.
c. Unchecked I.T revolution facilitated growth of terrorism.
d. Underestimation of table talks.
5. How to counter this new threat of terrorism.
[B]a. UN dominance over regional efforts to counter terrorism strategies.[/B]
b. OIC dominance over Muslim countries's counter terrorism strategies.
c. Demoting protectionism within countries.
d. Regional & international level Information sharing mechanisms
e. Defining terrorism in terms of regional & international perspective instead of national.
f. Effective table talks.
[B]6. Conclusion[/B]

Aoa,
I am not really an expert to evaluate someone effort;however, in my humble opinion there is no need to add heading number two.
Secondly, this topic demands solid solutions to combat terrorism.

Moreover, discuss the fundamental reasons of its emergence, for example, imperialism of the US, Proxy warfare, hegemonic desires of India and Saudi Arab in their respective religions, shia- sunni factor.
or may be at state level like poverty, unemployment, fast urbanization and gap between the rich and the poor etc.

i hope I am not digressing from the central idea.

I am not expert so dont take my opinion too seriously.

Aanwar,,, Thanks for stopping by.. I appreciate your comment. For the Heading No.2 You are absolutely right I am totally agree with you. While your rest of observations are also important. As you said to,,,, mentioned about fundamental reasons, proxy wars, hegemonic desires of india and sunni-shia,,,, I exactly did the same in different heading names, i.e Origins & spread of terrorism, Terrorism sponsorship in the name of counter-ship (proxies), Terrorism driven by political objectives (concerns in Balochistan, Afghanistan etc). About the Unemployment you are right I totally missed it... However, as you observed that it needs solid combat solutions to address it.... I think the combat solutions that I have proposed are solid enough... May be my headings have different wordings,, but I still consider them pretty solid... What do you suggest, in your point of view that how solid can those combat solutions be?
Once again I warmly appreciate you opinion. It certainly helped me to view from different perspective. Thanks a lot.

AOA,
Thanks for taking my views positively.
without making full-fledged outline it is difficult to suggest solutions; however, let me try something.

How to fight with emerging threat of terrorism:
[B]At National level: [/B]
a) Develop National counter- terrorism policies and initiate them with full vigor.( NAP)
b) To stem out the growth of fundamentalism and extremism ( provide resources to theterrorist outfits)
c) To block financial reservoirs of such organization
d) focus on intelligence let operation
e) Narrative building against terrorism ( In Pakistan we have people who support the acts of terrorist )
f) fighting social issues( only single sub-heading unemployment, poverty etc )
g) adopting offensive approach rather than defensive policies.( to curb the scourge once and for all)
[B]At international level:[/B]
a) revisiting the role and rewriting international social contract (UNO charter)
b) need to have clear, unbiased, and impartial definition of the term Terrorism ( dilemma is that there is no single def no terrorism)
c) To make proxy wars illegal and we can see against humanity.
d) To bridge the gap between shia-sunnies( OIC)
e) need for strong regional based organizations ( ASEAN)

These are just few points that can be mentioned though they are not in proper order and there is no symmetry as i wrote without proper brain storming. you can add or subtract from them and even disagree with me on them brother.

Thanks!

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1. Environmental Concern is changing the course of International Politics.
2. “The death of dogma is the birth of morality.” (Emmanuel Kant)
3. Good fences make good neighbours.
4. Digitisation and Pakistan democracy.
5. Relevance of Organisation of Islamic Cooperation today.
6. Food & Water Security challenges Pakistan may face in the near future.
7. Does the UN still matter?
8. Among all the multilateral blocs of which Pakistan is a member, which one serves Pakistan's interest more?
9. Independent thinking should be encouraged right from the childhood.
10. Women Sportsperson are building soft image of Pakistan abroad. Comment. [/SIZE]

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