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Thank you for your response. I added some to the of those points, but not elaborated in detail. Could have expanded on Media's Role, but rather than pin pointing most of details - I just touched generally like how the masses should be educated etc. Though, I did discuss all the points mentioned in essay, some in more detail others just top off it. Thank you, I also hope just to pass tbh. Good day to you! |
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The hope part I actually did after discussing the hurdles and showing in the end how an informed voter can make a difference. Tbh, as long as I pass I'd be fine. I just hope tbis piece gets me that. Thank you for your response. Good day to you.
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Overall, your outline is good, however, it would have been far better if you had made a single point of history of democracy in Pakistan (for that is a complementary point). Also, merging the 3rd and the 5th principle headings into a single heading pertaining to the hopes would have made it more organized.
I hope you have not made mistakes in your Essay such as writing 'A birdeye view' when it should have been 'A bird's eye view'. Do not worry about the facts and figures thing - I did not refer to even a single fact / figure in my Essay of CE 2017; essay is not a research paper. |
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Thank you for your input. Hopefully, not many such mistakes though you may understand writing with just some time left on the clock would to certain minor mistakes - though hopefully not major ones as I tried to keep correcting them as I went along. Yeah, I just hope them facts and figures aren't THAAAT important. Again, a pass would be enough. Good day and Good luck to you!
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1. introduction 2. meaning * derivation of the word democracy 3. definition * by abraham lincoln 4. types of democracy direct--- people,directly par5icipate indirect--- through legal representative 5. organs of state legislature executive judiciary 6. charachteristic of democracy .political parties . adult frqnchise . elections . public opinion . independent judiciary etc 7. forms of govt and history of demkcracy in pak * 1956 const--- parliamnetry * 1962 const ---- presidential as given by military dictator * 1973 const--- parliamenty 8. hurdles . conflict b/w organs . no rule of law . military invasions . rigging . corruption . political parties role . non independce of jidiciary . sit in protests . horse trading . foreign elements etc 9. effects . dictatorahip . rights curbing . no rule of law . no peoples rule etx 10. hopes and suggestion . free n fair elction . timely election .smoothe transfer of power . non military interfer3nce . respect of pu lic opinion . independence of judicary . political parties positive role . religious parties role . integration etc 11. role of media in safeguarding democracy 12. constituional,proviosons protectinv democracy * article 6---- treason * 223- 227 election provision 13.democract in pak vs ind 14. pak vs west * uk * us 15 islam n democracy in pak 16. conclusion
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Essay passed ?
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The summary of my outline for this essay is as follows:
Introduction History of democracy in Pakistan *Post-independence situation *Present situation Future of Democracy in Pakistan Challenges faced by Democracy in Pakistan Suggestion to improve democracy in Pakistan Conclusion And at 11:55 I had merely finished the portion of challenges. Left the suggestions portion and wrote conclusion in 3-4 lines after which the paper was snatched by invigilators. I was much worried afterwards but surprisingly I got 62 marks in it. Now moral of the story is that you have to keep your essay in perfect alignment with the topic given. No need to define democracy or its advantage/disadvantages etc like the most candidates do. |
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Kashif7pm (Sunday, December 09, 2018) |
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How much did you manage to score in this essay? |
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Hi Bakr,
Unfortunately, 30. I was really hoping to do well in it. I really think it was my hand writing towards the end (2-4 pages) which gave it away. I did really well in Precis & Comp. and truth be told I didn't even prepare for it. Or for many other subjects which includes Eco, Business and Journalism & Criminology (took first time). Wish you luck, need a lot of practice. I did it with a full time job, 6 days a week. So, it's doable. Just need to put your head to it. Ta ra!
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