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mentioning facts and figures are an important aspect of scoring in essay paper. Your outline is good but not too good. if you have covered all the points in your outline then you can pass, if you haven't committed grammatical mistakes.
A flawless piece will give you 40-44 marks.
Moreover, if you have included quotations and figures like Pak score on democratic index etc then they will help you in scoring above 40.

Wish you best of luck. You have done your part. Now pray for a better result (only this is going to change your fate).

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Hi All,

It is my first attempt at CSS. Today's paper was apparently easier but the easiness made it a little more confusing for me because I believe, I could have written on 3-4 of the given topics. But being not very sure about certain facts and figures and some thinking, I went for democratic one. However, seeing that how it is a gamble and we can't really say anything about passing or failing, here's a "rough" outline of my essay for review.

Pages: 3.5 for outline - Pages for Essay: 9.5 (all sides) Approx. 280+ words on each page as my writing is rather in small font. Total word count should be approx. 2500-2700.

1. Introduction
- What is democracy?
- A birdeye view of democracy and it's comparison
- Different democratic systems

2. History of Democracy in Pakistan
- Civil governments and disagreements
- Military Interventions and dismemberment of Pakistan
- Back on track since 2008 elections
- 2013 elections and emergence of third political power
- Current scenario

3. Importance of Democracy - Reasons
*Social and Political
- Gives people awareness about their rights
- Voice to weak people
- Representatives are aware of their responsibilities and duties
- Democratic values like freedom of expression, tolerance, pluralism, justice and equality prevail
- Freedom of expression leads to innovation through exchange of ideas

*Economic
- Political stability helps develop economy
- Presents better image to the world, helps in trade
- Can help to curb menaces like unemployment, poverty and illiteracy

4. Democracy in Pakistan: Hurdles
*Administrative
- Corruption and mismanagement
- Nepotism, Favoritism
- Red tapism
- Conflicts among provincial and federal governments

*Political
- Military interventions
- Political immaturity
- Self interests and conflicts
- No independent judiciary

*Social
- Masses not aware about power of their vote
- Votes are given based on ethnical or racial affiliations
- Feudals can influence the poor people for votes

*Religious
- Forgotten teachings of Islam
- Votes are given on basis of religious affiliations
- Religion is used by leaders and scholars to get votes

*Legal and Educational
- Laws are twisted by leaders for their self interests
- Leaders are not educated or trained enough
- Laymam is not educated about their rights

5. Hopes for Democracy in Pakistan: Suggestions
- Empowering Institutions
- No corruption
- Enchanced role of NAB
- No military interventions
- Educating masses about their rights and responsibilies (including politicians)
- Independent Judiciary
- Developing culture of democracy
- Political maturity
- Taking inspirations from the developed democracies of the world
- Taking inspirations from the teachings of Islam

6. Conclusion
- Pakistan is a young democracy
- It will get better with more time and trial and errors
- Need political will and everyone playing individual and collective roles to secure democratic Pakistan
- No power on earth can undo Pakistan
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So this is it. I must have missed some points to add or may be only one or two might not be wrong here.

I was busy in outline till 10.15am, so had not enough time to write more. I believe as if I still missed something, though my introduction was more than a page bit conclusion just a half page or so. Grammatical and spelling mistakes should be not many, though my hand writing is not amazing. Also, I kept it rather simple than using fancy words.

Overall, I am not sure what will be the outcome but surely could have done better. Unfortunately, did not use quotes or figures as was running short on time, so I just covered almost all points of outline briefly - perhaps missed one or two. :l

Nevertheless, what's done is done and can't do anything about it. Allah Maalik.

Thank you for reading/reviewing and your time.

Good day!
What was your result? Please share with us.
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What was your result? Please share with us.
He has shared his score, check on previous page. He has got 30 marks.
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