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San Sufi your essay is not that impressive. It could have been more better! Can you please share your introduction?
Got 42 marks with that "not so impressive outline". Moreover, got 55 in P and C. Never prepared P and C Paper and Essay. Only wrote 2 to 3 Essays on this forum and 3 to 4 precis here. US Histroy ne armano ka khoon kr dea.
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Got 42 marks with that "not so impressive outline". Moreover, got 55 in P and C. Never prepared P and C Paper and Essay. Only wrote 2 to 3 Essays on this forum and 3 to 4 precis here. US Histroy ne armano ka khoon kr dea.
Your outline is ok and passing. Usually, examiners pass candidates with cause, effect and remedy pattern for this type of problematic essays.
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The outlines are impressive but try to include some good terms in headings
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Dear San, Hard luck with your US history, but I am sure you will do great next time. Regarding your essay I liked the fact that the English is simple and the outline very clear, and in my opinion, it was a good attempt you made there.

I have a few questions about the essay in case you can help me:

1. Did you use these outlines in your final essay too?
2. Did you make the lists/bullets in the essay?
3. How many words you wrote in total (estimated)
4. How did you put quotes in the essay? (indented/italics/centered)

It will be great help if I can get guidance from someone first hand who cleared the essay.
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Dear San, Hard luck with your US history, but I am sure you will do great next time. Regarding your essay I liked the fact that the English is simple and the outline very clear, and in my opinion, it was a good attempt you made there.

I have a few questions about the essay in case you can help me:

1. Did you use these outlines in your final essay too?
2. Did you make the lists/bullets in the essay?
3. How many words you wrote in total (estimated)
4. How did you put quotes in the essay? (indented/italics/centered)

It will be great help if I can get guidance from someone first hand who cleared the essay.
No, you can not make bullets in essay except in outline.
I wrote around 1500 words and got 41 marks.
As far as quotes are concerned, you can put in accordance with logic. In some paragraphs, I wrote them in begining and in others, at the end.
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It needs little bit addition of topics.
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The Threats of Global Warming and the Ways to Counter it.
1. Introduction (Opening and thesis statement)
2. Increasing warming of the planet earth
3. Threats to Global Warming
3.1 Acute Paucity of Water
3.2 Melting Permafrost and Icecaps
3.3. Exorbitant increase in GHG emissions
3.4. Soil erosion
3.5. Extinction of polar and aquatic creatures
3.6. Overpopulation
4. Possible repercussions
4.1. Increase in flood and drought crisis
4.2. Food insecurity
4.3. Species influx from cold to warm areas
4.4. Acid rain
4.5. Increasing demand for water
5. Ways to counter global warming
5.1. Compliance of global accords/agreements
5.2. Replacement of non-renewable with renewable energy resources
5.3. Indispensability of plantation and seed protection
5.4. Water conservation
5.5. Need to achieve SDGs' targets
6. Conclusion
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