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The threats of Global warming and the ways to counter it


1. Introduction

a. What is global warming?
b. What are the threats of global warming?
c. Nobel Peace Prize winner’s speech
“Climate change is not a political issue; it’s a moral and spiritual challenge to humankind” –Al Gore (Ex-American Vice President, Environmentalist, and Nobel Peace Prize winner-2007)

2. Thesis Statement
The world is facing severe global warming and climate change crisis and it is badly affecting the life of all species existing on this planet.

3. Historical Aspects of Global Warming and Climate Change

4. Current Threats of Global Warming
Increasing global temperature
Melting of glaciers
Rising sea levels
Depletion of Ozone Layer
Acid rain
Relentless hurricanes, typhoon, cyclone etc.
Generation of heat waves
Growing long periods of summer season
Destruction of crops and losing of soil fertility
Heat waves and heavy rainfalls

5. Global Warming and Climate Change in Pakistan

6. Causes of Global Warming

Greenhouse gases
Over industrialization
Marked increase in the usage of fossil fuels
Exploration of mines, oil and gas reserves, and digging
Extensive usage of plastic, rubber and glass material
Deforestation
Volcanism

7. Ways to Counter Global Warming

a. Combating Global Warming on International Level

Earth summit 1992
Kyoto Protocol 1997
Bali Summit 2007
Copenhagen Accord 2009
Durban Summit 2011
Fifth IPCC 2014 Report
Paris Summit 2015
UN’s Sustainable Development Goal No. 13: Climate Change
"Take urgent action to combat climate change and its impacts by regulating emissions and promoting developments in renewable energy."

b. Suggestions
Clean and green renewable energy
More and more plantation of trees
Molding state policies according to International policies on climate change
Smoke filtration in chimneys and vehicles
Employing latest technology
Control CHG Concentrations

8. Conclusion
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Did you write this in paper?

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I wrote this outline. It is not complete, I have forgotten some points.

Global warming is the gravest threat facing humanity right now. The threat of Global warming has put survival of the ‘mother earth’ at stake…..

… If humanity does not wake up to the threat of rising temperature, the flames of global warming will surround the planet earth and devour it all.

INTRODUCTION

**What is the threat of Global Warming?

CAUSES

1.Green House Gases: little trappers of heat.

2. Deforestration: robbing earth of it green cover

3. Unplanned urbanization and the ‘Heat Island Effect’

4. Population Explosion: more people, more industry and more Green House Gas emission

5. Lack of Global response and the fate of the Paris Agreement

6. Industrial Expansion

7. There were 2 more points which, I don't remember.

IMPACTS

1.Melting glaciers and rising sea levels.

2.Threat of water wars

3.Floods

4.Food scarcity and famines

SOLUTIONS

1.Reducing the amount of Green house gases in the atmosphere

2. Controlling increase in population

3. Afforestation

4. Planned urbanization

…… there were 2 more

CONCLUSION

Is this a passing essay? I misspelled greenhouse in the intro, hope this doesn't offend examiner.

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I think, I failed to emphasize more on threats. I mentioned threats but, under the heading of Impacts. I hope and pray to Allah the I don't get penalized.

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The threats of Global warming and the ways to counter it


1.Introduction

a.What is global warming?
b.What are the threats of global warming?
c.Nobel Peace Prize winner’s speech
“Climate change is not a political issue; it’s a moral and spiritual challenge to humankind” –Al Gore (Ex-American Vice President, Environmentalist, and Nobel Peace Prize winner-2007)

2.Thesis Statement
The world is facing severe global warming and climate change crisis and it is badly affecting the life of all species existing on this planet.

3.Historical Aspects of Global Warming and Climate Change

4.Current Threats of Global Warming
Increasing global temperature
Melting of glaciers
Rising sea levels
Depletion of Ozone Layer
Acid rain
Relentless hurricanes, typhoon, cyclone etc.
Generation of heat waves
Growing long periods of summer season
Destruction of crops and losing of soil fertility
Heat waves and heavy rainfalls

5.Global Warming and Climate Change in Pakistan

6.Causes of Global Warming

Greenhouse gases
Over industrialization
Marked increase in the usage of fossil fuels
Exploration of mines, oil and gas reserves, and digging
Extensive usage of plastic, rubber and glass material
Deforestation
Volcanism

7.Ways to Counter Global Warming

a.Combating Global Warming on International Level

Earth summit 1992
Kyoto Protocol 1997
Bali Summit 2007
Copenhagen Accord 2009
Durban Summit 2011
Fifth IPCC 2014 Report
Paris Summit 2015
UN’s Sustainable Development Goal No. 13: Climate Change
"Take urgent action to combat climate change and its impacts by regulating emissions and promoting developments in renewable energy."

b.Suggestions
Clean and green renewable energy
More and more plantation of trees
Molding state policies according to International policies on climate change
Smoke filtration in chimneys and vehicles
Employing latest technology
Control CHG Concentrations

8.Conclusion
Nice outline by the way

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Boy you did a great job.
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San Sufi your essay is not that impressive. It could have been more better! Can you please share your introduction?
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Brother, your essay is fine as far as the topic "global warming" is concerned but you have mentioned more irrelevant material than relevant material. You should have focused on the topic of essay more than on the matter which was not required

Moreover, I think that your outline is too lengthy. I may be wrong, but I don't think that v would have been able to write as much as you have mentioned in your outline due to time constraints. Can you tell me how many pages did u write on this outline ?
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AlsO, under the "ways to counter" heading you have mentioned Kyoto protocol etc etc...You should know that these international arrangements failed to produce any outcome w.r.t climate change ...so clearly they are not the "ways" to counter... You should have mentioned only paris climate change agreement
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