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I don't find it satisfactory. It seems like you have completely missed the point. You are more dwelling more into some literally works, without mentioning some good facts in the outline. Also, the start of the introduction is out of context. The introduction must start with sentences that directly hit the topic or the thesis statement but in this case it citing an example.
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1. Introduction
Thesis Statement: Real development is an all-in approach which transforms the social, economic and political lives of people. 2. Amelioration in economy alone is not really development. 3. The true manifestation of the term "development": Improving people's living standard in all segments of affairs. 4. Multifaceted developments which enhance men's lives: 4.1 Social Development a. fair and reachable education for all; b. unbiased justice; c. equal social opportunities; d. safety and security in daily life; e. predictability in social affairs 4.2 Political Development a. unbridled participation in political affairs; b. freedom of speech; c. no fear of becoming a political victim; 4.3 Economic Development a. parity in wealth distribution; b. safety and security of wealth; c. proper mechanism to handle economic scams and corruption; d. just taxes; e. equal opportunities for economic development. 5. People's improved lives can be gauged when they: 5.1. become an inclusive part of society; 5.2. are predictable about their affairs; 5.3. trust the justice and political system; 5.4. feel secure in their economic transactions. 6Conclusion |
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