Real development should transform people's lives , not just economic statics
 

REAL DEVELOPMENT SHOULD TRANSFORM PEOPLE’S LIVES, NOT JUST ECONOMIC STATICS.

OUTLINE

1. INTRODUCTION:

Real progress does not lie only in economic growth. True development encompasses inclusive socio-economic growth, intellectual development, sanctity of human rights, and enlightened ideas.

2. DECONSTRUCTING THE STATEMENT IN ITS HISTORICAL CONTEXT.

i. Socrates and intellectual development.
ii. Plato and real development.
(i) Four platonic virtues.
(a) Justice, courage, wisdom, moderation.
iii. Reformation era and martin Luther’s struggle for real development.
iv. The enlightenment and industrial revolution.
(i) Flowering of ideas and reason.
(ii) Humanism.
(iii) Postmodernism and real development.
(a) Religious tolerance.
(b) Internationalism.
(c) Environmentalism.

3. SCHOLARLY VIEWS ON REAL DEVELOPMENT.

i. John lock and civic sense.
ii. Voltaire and humanism.
iii. Bertrand Russell and importance of knowledge and ideas.
4. WHAT DOES REAL DEVELOPMENT SIGNIFY HERE.

i. Inclusive socio-economic growth and social justice.
ii. Democratic institutions.
iii. Aesthetic appreciation.
iv. The sanctity of human rights and religious tolerance.

5. THE CONTEMPORARY DEVELOPMENT AND ITS NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCES.

i. Widening socio-economic disparity
(a) 14 percent rich, 86 percent poor.
ii. Proliferation of nuclear weapons.
(a) Around 16.500 nuclear weapon in the world.
(b) Around 1000 nuclear weapons are on hair-trigger alert.
iii. Mass consumerism and global warming.
iv. The exploitation of the poor.
v. Democracy and fundamental rights are under cloud because of corruption.

6. HOW TO INTERNALIZE TRUE DEVELOPMENT.

i. Inclusive socio-economic growth.
ii. Strengthening democratic institutions.
iii. Appreciating aesthetic sense.
iv. Safeguarding human rights.
v. Investing in the human capital.
vi. Gender equality and women empowerment.

7. CONCLUSION:

In a nutshell, real development lies in social justice, intellectual pragmatism and sound civic sense.

INTRODUCTION (STARTED WITH CHINESE EXAMPLE)

China has pulled out around 800 million people of poverty since deg Xiaoping’s reforms in the 1980s. This development has been achieved at the cost of environmental degradation and the exploitation of the blue-collar workers. Economic growth at any cost is the slogan of contemporary times. Donald trump’s America first also depends on economic, growth, lamentably, the world has turned a blind eye towards the human rights, intellectual progress and aesthetic sense man has become a robot which has no feelings and emotions.
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[B]Thesis statement
[/B]
Indeed, the real development lies in the quality of human resource of the country, and economic statistics, on that part, are futile scale and pitfall to measure the development.

[B]1. What is the real development
[/B]In the 21st century, development entails 4 major aspects.
Equality
Participation
Empowerment
Sustainability

[B]2.Global race of development: a pitfall of economic figures and statics
[/B]Is developed world is really developed? (west)
How 'the rise of rest' entraps in the race of economic statics (India, China,
Brazil etc)
Is the 21st really going toward real development? (SDG of UN)

[B]3. Pakistan in the era of development
[/B]
THE development paradox of the Pakistan high- economic growth rate and poor socio-economic indicators.

the high economic growth rate of 5.7% (32nd in the world and is being predicted have the potential to become the 10th largest economy of the world. ), but dismal human development status 147th in the world

the education budget has ascended $780 million, but abysmal education status-58% literacy rate, 24 million students out of school

Pakistan Army ranked as the World’s 13th most powerful military, but what about low social security

[B]4. What went wrong on that part?
[/B]
politics without governance
shrinking socio-economic opportunities and differential of access base on
gender and geography
institutional encroachment or imbalance
lack of a clear vision of the power elite

[B]5.how can the country (Pakistan) achieve real development?
[/B]
the answer is simple and only:people-centric developmental approaches

Pakistan has vast untapped potential and resource
60% of youth bulge should be the asset rather liability of the county
invest


Purposeful education which can meet to the tody's standards of earning of the livelihood (technical, scientific and vocational skills ) and to live (moral intellectual consciousness, and ethical and rational independent approach).


A democracy with its integral part of good governance not merely elected representative: equitable distribution of benefit of growth and easy, low cost and speedy access to basic public services (health, education, food, justice, and shelter )


the mega project like CPEC must be a game changer, in the real sense, for common people




Adequately and strategically configure the country in modern globalized, digital revolutionized word and ripe the fruit of vital geostrategic location


the contribution of media should be quality journalism, freedom and independence, justice, humaneness, and cultivating the social good
[B]6.conclusion
[/B]

[B]Real Development should Transform People's lives, not just Economic Statistics
[/B]
[B]Thesis Statement: Real development entails the acquisition of knowledge and experience, which ensure the provision of rights, adherence to laws, fulfilment of duties, and exchange of ideas and services, besides economic ascendency
[/B]

Outlines:
[B]1. Introduction
[/B]What is real development?
Raise people's standard of living not just economically, but morally, socially, and inclusively

[B]2. What transformation in human lives is essential to yield real development?
[/B]2.1. Education with parity
2.2. Understanding of moral obligation of respecting humanity
2.3. Adequate fulfilment of duties and their employment in the right place
2.4. Equal access to resources and opportunities
2.5. Learning discreet rhetoric

[B]3. Examples of countries with lower economic statistics but huger human development
[/B]3.1. Bangladesh, despite being one of the densest countries, has a higher literate populace
3.2. Sri Lanka, despite being economically insolvent, has overtaken other economically stable countries in terms of human development
- Human Capital Index ranks Sri Lanka at the second position
3.3. China's transformation in 20 years from being poorly developed into a rising economic power with the help of her manpower
3.4. American urbanization in the nineteenth century with the help of her labour system

[B]4. A sorry state of Pakistan
[/B]Despite being a resource-laden country, her ranking in human development is dismal
HDI ranking- 150th out of 189 countries
HCI ranking- stands in the last quartile

[B]Evident Causes
[/B]4.1. Social Causes
(a) Higher poverty level
(b) Low and unequal education system
(c) Marginal employment opportunities
(d) The gap between social contract among society's strata (existence of feudalism)
4.2. Political Causes
(a) The absence of rule of law
(b) Non-adherence to civil laws
(c) Lack of structural reforms
(d) Inter-provincial disharmony
4.3. Economic Causes
(a) Low investment due to deteriorating public opinion
(b) Ignorant labour masses in agriculture and industrial sectors
(c) The gap between capital and expenditures

[B]5. How can real development be pervaded in Pakistan?
[/B]5.1. Prioritize education
5.2. Esnure gender parity and equal opportunities
5.3 Modification of priorities in the Economic Survey of Pakistan
5.4. Citizens should be informed about policy measures and their results, as well as foreign dealings
5.5. Ensure youth's inclusion in the state-led enterprises based on meritocracy
5.6. Increase in state-to-state exchange programs
5.7. Imparting the need for family planning
5.8. Timely punishment of any breach of laws

[B]6. Critical Analysis

7. Conclusion[/B]

[B]1) Prologue[/B]

1.1) Real development is the transformation of lives of common people -- a path towards the attainment of a welfare state
1.2) Economic progress is a mean to attain the ultimate end -- the transformation of lives of people

[B][B]2) Thesis statement: Indeed, progress which fails to transform the lives of people is no progress at all.[/B][/B]

[B]3) Essentials of real development -- a glance upon few indicators[/B]

3.1) Inclusive progress -- equitable division of resources
3.2) Reduction in poverty -- availability of basic necessities to everyone
3.3) Equal opportunities -- an environment of competitiveness
3.4) Responsive government -- a hallmark of developed nations
3.5) Protection of fundamental rights -- living a dignified life
3.6) Corruption-free society -- strong moral and ethical values
3.7) Higher Human Development Index( HDI ) -- a parameter to gauge real progress

[B]4) How mere transformation in the economy has failed to bring real development -- glance upon evidence [/B]

4.1) Widening gap between the rich and poor -- result of non-equitable division of resources
4.2) Failure to ameliorate the down-trodden starta of society -- horror of poverty in the developing world
4.3) Exploitation of resources by the privileged class --increasing dissent among the masses
4.4) The profit motive has turned labor to machines -- utter disregard for human rights
4.5) Corruption is rampant in many developing countries -- the weakening of the moral and ethical values
4.6) Huge Gross-domestic-production but low Human Development Index -- evidence of temporary progress

[B]5) How to transform the lives of people -- the pragmatic way forward[/B]

5.1) Equal distribution of resources -- sharing the fruits of globalization
5.2) Making the reduction of poverty our top priority -- encouraging inclusive progress
5.3) Selecting responsive, accountable and visionary leadership -- a manifesto with an emphasis on the development of humans and not just the economy
[B]
6) Conclusion[/B]

[QUOTE=Waqas Kandwal;1082614][B]1) Prologue[/B]

1.1) Real development is the transformation of lives of common people -- a path towards the attainment of a welfare state
1.2) Economic progress is a mean to attain the ultimate end -- the transformation of lives of people

[B][B]2) Thesis statement: Indeed, progress which fails to transform the lives of people is no progress at all.[/B][/B]

[B]3) Essentials of real development -- a glance upon few indicators[/B]

3.1) Inclusive progress -- equitable division of resources
3.2) Reduction in poverty -- availability of basic necessities to everyone
3.3) Equal opportunities -- an environment of competitiveness
3.4) Responsive government -- a hallmark of developed nations
3.5) Protection of fundamental rights -- living a dignified life
3.6) Corruption-free society -- strong moral and ethical values
3.7) Higher Human Development Index( HDI ) -- a parameter to gauge real progress

[B]4) How mere transformation in the economy has failed to bring real development -- glance upon evidence [/B]

4.1) Widening gap between the rich and poor -- result of non-equitable division of resources
4.2) Failure to ameliorate the down-trodden starta of society -- horror of poverty in the developing world
4.3) Exploitation of resources by the privileged class --increasing dissent among the masses
4.4) The profit motive has turned labor to machines -- utter disregard for human rights
4.5) Corruption is rampant in many developing countries -- the weakening of the moral and ethical values
4.6) Huge Gross-domestic-production but low Human Development Index -- evidence of temporary progress

[B]5) How to transform the lives of people -- the pragmatic way forward[/B]

5.1) Equal distribution of resources -- sharing the fruits of globalization
5.2) Making the reduction of poverty our top priority -- encouraging inclusive progress
5.3) Selecting responsive, accountable and visionary leadership -- a manifesto with an emphasis on the development of humans and not just the economy
[B]
6) Conclusion[/B][/QUOTE]

You missed in the introduction and thesis statement how not the economics transform people's lives. You must take them both simultaneously (real development + economics).

[QUOTE=SikanderAbbasi;1082631]You missed in the introduction and thesis statement how not the economics transform people's lives. You must take them both simultaneously (real development + economics).[/QUOTE]

Economic progress is just a mean for development and the end is the transformation of lives of people. Mere good economic figures does not necessarily ensure progress of people at large. Hence, a progress that does not transform the lives of common people and serves to bring profit to the wealthy people, big business entities and large corporations is not a real progress. It may transform the lives of the elite class but fails to bring any substantial change in the lives of general public.