This is first time that i am jotting down outline for an essay.hope members will evaluate my assessment.i know a lot of work is still to be done by me.
well, i chosed the topic
'The country's need for a better disaster management system' as it seemed me the most difficult one. so i am going to take a start from this.

THE COUNTRY'S NEED FOR BETTER DISASTER MANAGEMENT SYSTEM


*Disaster- a nightmare for countries

*Types of disaters

*Effects of disasters on common man's life

*Extent of disasters and need of its management

*Link between disaster management and country's geographical stature

*Efficiency of management

*Effects of global warming on disaster management.

*Need of disaster management in third world countries

*Efficient role by govt and private organizations-a need of hour

*Disaster management in the coming days

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How can we remember our ignorance,which our growth requires, when we are using our knowledge all the time?? - Thoreau

Kindly any senior member check the outline of my essay critically and point out the mistakes and also give recommendations to improve it I shall be very thankful


BRAIN DRAIN IS THE SERIOUS PROBLEM IN PAKISTAN

Outline:

(1) The Issue
(2) Brain drain will bring numerous economic problems
(3) There will be lack of development
(4) It will enhance unskilled people
(5) It will affect industry,agriculture,banking and all the fields
(6) It is due to unemployment
(7) It is due to low pay scales
(8) It is due to nepotism and favouritism
(9) It is due to social impacts for instance some professions are considered odd and are not adopted by the people
(10) Political instability and policies of the government
(11) Corruption also worsens the situation
(12) Lack of opportunities for progress

(13) Ensurity of merit can remove it

(14) Debt for business

(15) Better law and order

(16) Foreign investment

(17) Summing up

good attempt, rather more than good, my suggesstion would be to add historical aspects for this issue, go to different countries and find out importance of this fact, like to tackled this issue and what results they got,
then another things could be raletd to what steps government has actually took to solve this issue

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@ armaghan arif.
a good attempt.
may i suggest a point, if i may?
--- Pushing factors of Pakistan and Pulling factors of Western countries, i.e. more job opportunities in the west and better salaries as compared to Pakistan.
Secondly deteriorating law and order condition, spreading throughout the country. Remember, many apply for political assylum in UK and Canada on sectarian basis.
Waisay your attempt is quite good.

Terrorism And The Role Of Pakistan
(1) The issue
(2) Difference between terrorism and freedom fighters
(3) Terrorism brings unemployment
(4) It brings political instability
(5) Lack of investment
(6) Lack of development and progress
(7) Proximity of Pakistan with Afghanistan
(8) Cordial relation of Pakistan with the Muslim countries
(9) Ethnic roots of Taliban are in Pakistan
(10) Well organized army
(11) Terrorism the problem for the whole world
(12) Terrorism is due to the massacre of innocents
(13) Terrorism is due to socio economic problems
(14) It is due to mafia
(15) It is due to brain washing
(16) Pakistan preferred negotiation over operation
(17) Pakistan promoted enlightened moderation to combat brain washing
(18) She worked in the development of tribal areas and Afghanistan
(19) She launched operation to cope with miscreants
(20) She provided logistic support for NATO force and allies
(21) Conclusion

What do you mean by (3) Terrorism brings unemployment? I thought it would be in such way unemployment brings Terrorism. Or may be, I would be wrong if you tell me a little bit detail.

In the ending points, who is SHE?

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~Useless youth if not useful for Pakistan~

Unemployment is one of the greatest problem of the world.A welfare government cannot be established without solving this issue.Terrorism enhances unemployment to a great extent because it reduces rate of investment--- whether foreign or local----in a country.No investor will invest his money in a country which is striken by terrorism. Consequently there will be less industries which will exacerbate the situation of unemployment.On the other hand an unemploymed person can eaisly be lured.He is more prone to crimes.He can sell his life and everything for the sake of a few loaves of bread.He can be a victim of terrorism very easily.So a vicious circle develops in which terrorism enhances unemployment and unemployment breads more terrorists
She means Pakistan
kindly give ur suggestions and tell me how to improve my essay

Nice ideas and approach to the topic. When one talk about some facts, one should avoid such things I am saying or in my opinion, or invest His money, or I conclude etc. Rather than all of this, one should say, it is being say/discussed or in some people's opinions, No one would invest one's money or no investor would invest his/her money becasue investor can be a female as well and should avoid being personal (as you see assume I am not saying YOU SHOULD SAY but saying one should say) etc.

Names of Countries and places don't have 'sex'. One should just use the name of the place, or should use the Spacial Dexis (i.e there, that etc.).

There is always a room for improvement, even my words would need improvement (I am sure some super senior like S.H Virk, Last Island etc. would do so). The improvement in your grammar would furnish your essay. Make a practice.

Regards

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~Useless youth if not useful for Pakistan~

FIRST OF ALL I WANT TO KNOW THAT HOW MANY OUTLINES WE CAN MAKE IN AN ESSAY.I MEAN TO SAY CAN WE DO IT AS WE WERE DOING IN OUR SCHOOL AND COLLEGE ESSAYS LIKE WE WERE MAKING SO MANY HEADINGS AND THEN WERE EXPLAINING THEM.

SIMILERLY IT WILL BE GREAT IF U CAN MAKE MAXIMUM OUTLINES OF THESE ESSAYS FOR ME.

THANKS.


TERRORISM IN PAKISTAN.
IS 'WAR ON TERROR' IS PAKISTAN'S OWN WAR OR ITS WAR OF USA.
ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN.
ECONOMIC CONDITIONS OF PAKISTAN.



THANKS

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SOME TIME WE HAVE TO TAKE THE RISK OF LIFE TO SAVE THE LIFE

1. Economy of pakistan
2. History of Pakistan`s economy
a. Strategy of economic planning in pakistan (it was initiated in the 1950`s)
b. Explanation of All eight -- five year plan and their impact on economy
c. Targets and Achievements
d. impact of socialism and capitalism in pakistan

3. Characteristics of Pakistan`s economy
a. Burden of international debt.
b. Low per capita income
c. Lack of industralization
d. Insufficient Investments
e. High rates of population growth
f. Under-utilization of Natural resources
g. Brain Drain
h. Scarcity of energy
i. High rate of inflation
j. Debacle of GDP
k. Increase in current expenditure
l. Lack of capital
m. No concept of saving
n. Low production

4. Obstacles or Constraints on the path to Economic development
a. Political influence
b. Corruption
c. Lack of technology
d. Lack of investment
e. Mush-room growth of education
f. Over population
g. Inefficient human capital
h. Dual economy (Market economy & subsistence economy)
i. Demonstration effect
j. Inadequate infrastructure facilities
k. Market imperfection (Narrow markets)

5. Scenario of Current Crisis
a. Raise in oil prices
b. Fall of stock market
c. Devaluation of currency
d. Increase in the rate of interest
e. War against Terrorism
f. Political instability
g. Fiscal deficit
h. Public sectors in crisis
i. Reduction in reserve
j. Textile crisis
k. Food crisis

6. Current economic policy and its implement by new government
a. Foreign aid
b. Agriculture
c. Narrow expenditures

7. Epilogue.

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