essay outlines and introduction
 

i started making outlines for essays and compared it with seniors essay outlines available on css forum,i got almost same points matched, with missing some angles.
but when i started writing introduction and remaining content, there is stark difference.
any suggestion to improve this.

P.s
i tried to borrow lines from their introduction also.

Don't try to copy, just take a hint from those outlines and essays. Read as much as you can, try to stick to one topic, then study then try to write the essay. the more you read and research the more good you going to write as an essay. Read read read and write write write. try to consult from books instead of google.

[QUOTE=ranasaqib;1073730]i started making outlines for essays and compared it with seniors essay outlines available on css forum,i got almost same points matched, with missing some angles.
but when i started writing introduction and remaining content, there is stark difference.
any suggestion to improve this.

P.s
i tried to borrow lines from their introduction also.[/QUOTE]

When you choose a topic, try to cover it through different angles. Make headings and sub-headings for further clarity. When you are done, make sure that the topic has been discussed entirely.
Try to write a good introduction, especially, the first line. It can be a summary of your outline.
For improvement, just write more and get it checked from a good teacher.