kindly evaluate this outline

Introduction
Supporting arguments
1. history is full of people who achieved apparently impossible things through hard work
2. Nations got freedom only after they fought tooth and nail for their independence
3. nations that went into overdrive are leading the world today
4. Quaid-e-Azam succeeded in founding Pakistan only through blood,sweet and tears
5. people who go extra mile in attaining education become intellectuals
6. scientists have revolutionized the world through continuous research
7. Islam also adjures people to work hard to become successful in this life as well as hereafter
8. the holy prophet (PBUH) worked day and night for the spread of islam
9. all great personalities had to burn the candle at both ends to reach the height of success
10. there is no shortcut to success
Conclusion

Introduction

Success is a state of comfortable existence. If you want to live in success, you have to work hard with capacity of wisdom, resilience of abilities, doing the right things, and having faith in success.

When you start a constructive hard work for reaching an objective, it gives you a feeling of progression, satisfaction and confidence. However, untill you reach your objective , you will have to work hard. Still the arrival of an objective does not mean that you are okay in all the areas of your life. Obviously man is not perfect but the hard work for a single objective or more objectives in life opens up success for you.

Nations create issues and leaders go with it's pace to overcome them. However the pace of leaders, to overcome the issues, depends on some basic factors like skills, resources, networking, and future prospects etc. And these factor determine the coping strategies of leaders and the success level of the concerned citizens.

Here these factors not only determine the appraoch of leaders to an issue, but also the fate of the concerned people and their leaders. As there are different cases of the leaders and the concerned people to work hard to overcome a challenge and to arrive the desired success. Like some work hard just to resist the issues, some overcome them , some along with overcoming the issues make future precautions for next time, and some go beyond the precautions. Which determine the conditions and success level of a state/country and it's citizens.


Historical Evidences. (Supporting arguments)
Keep your these points as they are..

1. history is full of people who achieved apparently impossible things through hard work

2. Nations got freedom only after they fought tooth and nail for their independence


4. Quaid-e-Azam succeeded in founding Pakistan only through blood,sweet and tears

6. scientists have revolutionized the world through continuous research


7. Islam also adjures people to work hard to become successful in this life as well as hereafter

8. the holy prophet (PBUH) worked day and night for the spread of islam

9. all great personalities had to burn the candle at both ends to reach the height of success

Main Body Of Your Essay..

.write your own observations and ideas of what currently is happening

10. there is no shortcut to success


Meet the challenges of the world is facing today.

Agree with its facts.

Disagree with its effects.

Write generalized solutions

3. All the leaders (instead of nations) must go into overdrive to create (write what you want here,limitedly) instead of to lead the world today

5. people must go extra go extra mile in attaining education to become intellectuals

My Personal Hopes

.express your hopes in points. And make the world a heaven
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Your
Conclusion

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"Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts" Winston Churchill