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Leo, here I differ. It all about observation. I am also convinced that relevancy is the key in the essay writing, but you cant left problemwithout finding its root cause and suggesting the remedy to it. The only thing is how much it should be the part of one's writing which depends on the given statement. (for instance, if you are newspaper reader, even though an article or editorial explicit problem telling has same shade to indicate bone of contention and possible way forward, here you will definitely tell me CSS essay and newspaper writing are disparate, but here I am just mentioning that how generally a writer approach to a problem).
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"I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it"

As far as material I have prepared water extensively on national regional and global level so I have enough reasonable material and data to write on how water shortage endanger national unity and integrity. ( read PILDAT's report in this regard)
First of all, you have every right not to agree with my opinion. Secondly, major problem in essay lies in the fact that everyone recommends differently for tackling it. After getting opinions from different Professors and CSPs, I have compiled my own rules of essay writing. But, still not fully satisfied in some topics and still in search for "what to write and what not to write" as you have already mentioned relevancy is the key for essay writing. Certainly, I will share that topics with you. By the way, have you discussed essay writing tactics with some good teachers or CSPs or you are preparing on your own? And one more thing can you share that PILDAT report as I'm writing essay on water crisis?
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First of all, you have every right not to agree with my opinion. Secondly, major problem in essay lies in the fact that everyone recommends differently for tackling it. After getting opinions from different Professors and CSPs, I have compiled my own rules of essay writing. But, still not fully satisfied in some topics and still in search for "what to write and what not to write" as you have already mentioned relevancy is the key for essay writing. Certainly, I will share that topics with you. By the way, have you discussed essay writing tactics with some good teachers or CSPs or you are preparing on your own? And one more thing can you share that PILDAT report as I'm writing essay on water crisis?
Yes ,I am taking guidance from professionals.
Just Google PILDAT report on water and provincial conflict you will find out easily . Currently , I don't has this one in my hard ware ).
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Yes ,I am taking guidance from professionals.
Just Google PILDAT report on water and provincial conflict you will find out easily . Currently , I don't has this one in my hard ware ).
Doesn't matter if you don't have. I will search it. It means these professionals have guided you that in every problematic essay one must write causes and solutions irrespective of whatever the direction may be given in topic.
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Doesn't matter if you don't have. I will search it. It means these professionals have guided you that in every problematic essay one must write causes and solutions irrespective of whatever the direction may be given in topic.

To be honest, it is my conviction but I was appreciated by two of them for this approach. Never the less it is one art and appropriate choice of words to make relevancy even one can make the antithesis in favor of one's argument. for instance, I mentionthe legal frameworkas a solution, which you find irrelevant, but I have a strong argument about how the ambiguous laws related to water, which is scarce resource without substitution, the inefficiency of Council of Common Commission and absence of a water policy created mistrust among provinces and how politician has been exploiting the situation and what is way forward to achieve a harmony under legal framework. (in that way my argument colored with the shade of given aspect that in national unity and water shortage)
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1. Introduction
Pakistan, despite being a sovereign country and geographically powerful, has been following the dictates of the US
2. Thesis Statement
How Pakistan has politically, economically, and socially been victimized and how it has overcome foreign pressure in different aspects
3. Overview of retrospective actions and consequences
3.1. Despite Pakistan being a Capitalist country, the US should not have backtracked her during the 1965 Indo-Pak war
3.2. Influx of Afghan refugees as a result of Soviet occupation
3.3. Denial of signing of non-Proliferation treaty and resort to nuclear ambitions to combat India's growing nuclear ambitions
3.4. Partaking to the US-led War on Terror and adverse effects on the country's infrastructure and civilians
3.5. Sacrificing national integrity with no fruitful results
4. What presently must Pakistan do?
4.1. Containment of Indian Military Insurgency by peaceful means
4.2. Improvement in bilateral relations with regional allies
4.3. Continuation of trade relations with China through investment as a substitute for the US so-called military aid
4.4. Aggressive measures against non-state entities
4.4.1. Elimination of inhabited militant organizations
4.4.2. Conviction of Kulbhusan Jhadav vis-a-vis International laws
4.4.3. Thwarting of sectarian groups irrespective of radical fright
4.5. Abidance to energy and other industrial imports despite US sanctions
4.6. Supplanting loans with investments to resume economic stabilization
4.7. Upholding of moral principles and religious obligations
5. Examples of other countries
5.1. Iranian oil imports to European Union in spite of US economic sanctions
5.2. Turkey looking for other allies to sustain her forex rate
5.3. Russian exports of her arms
5.4. China's hegemony in South China sea
6. Critical Analysis
7. Conclusion
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To be honest, it is my conviction but I was appreciated by two of them for this approach. Never the less it is one art and appropriate choice of words to make relevancy even one can make the antithesis in favor of one's argument. for instance, I mentionthe legal frameworkas a solution, which you find irrelevant, but I have a strong argument about how the ambiguous laws related to water, which is scarce resource without substitution, the inefficiency of Council of Common Commission and absence of a water policy created mistrust among provinces and how politician has been exploiting the situation and what is way forward to achieve a harmony under legal framework. (in that way my argument colored with the shade of given aspect that in national unity and water shortage)
I appreciate your efforts. You have good knowledge about it. But keeping in consideration the sensitivity of this subject, I always take it seriously. As every year large number of aspirants fail in this paper and certainly there are reasons behind it. The foremost reason is even a little bit divergence from main topic. These days, I'm devoting my maximum time on essay writing as in next month on 5th November, I have to face essay paper for the first time (PMS-Sindh) and I want to pass it. Actually my purpose for coming on this forum is that "we can collectively formulate effective techniques for essay writing which can help us in passing this paper in our first attempt". So, never think that I'm just here to prove you wrong. Infact, we will always learn from each other by sharing impressive strategies and discussing different topics.
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I appreciate your efforts. You have good knowledge about it. But keeping in consideration the sensitivity of this subject, I always take it seriously. As every year large number of aspirants fail in this paper and certainly there are reasons behind it. The foremost reason is even a little bit divergence from main topic. These days, I'm devoting my maximum time on essay writing as in next month on 5th November, I have to face essay paper for the first time (PMS-Sindh) and I want to pass it. Actually my purpose for coming on this forum is that "we can collectively formulate effective techniques for essay writing which can help us in passing this paper in our first attempt". So, never think that I'm just here to prove you wrong. Infact, we will always learn from each other by sharing impressive strategies and discussing different topics.
There is no way to acquire the precise strategy for this because it does not exist, but one can touch the realm of accuracy (which again interwind with a number of factors). There is no fixed formula for CSS OR PMS and when one comes across ESSAY no way at all. The simple solution is to approach all credible sources available to one, listen to only those which sound logical and cogent, adopt which suit you and cut them strategically according to the need of the time.
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Leo, we should bear one thing more in our mind. Easy writing is an art to write or construct ideas instantly, sitting in the examination hall, so how one should tackle if one does not have enough relevant arguments, here one's general abilities come to action to customize one's ideas (whatever come to one's mind on the spot). This is the very art one has to acquire.

For instance, you have one topic Women's political status in pakitan you must be able to write against or favor of it. Even though I have to write in a particular direction I should aware of the holistic perspective.on which I am going to pen.

1.so, if I have to prove how Women' political status has ascended I will subscribe following ideas
  • women political quota has raised 17% in national and 33% in the local sphere since 2001, and how it benefited women related laws
  • participation of women in political gathering and demonstration
  • quoting some reports and studies(national and international level) which evident that how the political status of women has raised within the country

If I choose to side with otherwise, I will subscribe following facts and approaches
  • women have been the victim of socioeconomic discrimination because of low political representation since inception although quota has been fixed for them, in absence of direct constituencies, this quota is filled by kith and kins of political leaders. Hereby, it seems women are as least represented as before.
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I am so sorry to post/comment irrelevant question, but I have to ask. Is this forum user-friendly?
I have been suggested to use this forum regarding acquiring necessary information about CSS exam, but I posted something and did not get any response....

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Hi all, I want to ask you guys to recommend me a book covering US History from Pre-1492 era to present day. Now not everyone has the ability to absorb the history, especially when it's not written in simple way. I once saw that book "Story of Our Land and People" by Glenn William Moon, in which I read few pages and I managed to understand the whole story how Indians got settled on land, now known as USA. It was written so well and the story was so simply explained that it gave me impression that it might be for Elementary level students. Now I looked for that book at million stores and even asked my friend who's in UAE for it, but not any luck finding that.
I want that kind of a book for a person like me, which covers the basic background of Pre-1492 era to present day in a very simple way. Just High School level! Simple written and explained with easy vocabulary. please guys, suggest me any such book. I shall be very grateful to you.
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Do tell me how do you get a notification when someone entertains your query? I have posted something, but nobody has responded yet. Now, if someone gives me response on that specific post or where I commented, how would I get to know about that???
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