Dear Aspirants of CSS-19, I am starting this thread with the intention to share my daily writing for essay paper during whole month of October. All of you would be highly appreciated to contribute not just in terms of analyzing the write up but also for sharing your own essay outline or body if you may, thereby, polishing your skill as well.

Real development should transform people’s lives, not just economic statistics

Outline:

1. Introduction

2. Relative performance of countries all over the world

a. Devising tools for comparing performance
b. Setting standards and gauging reform activities
3. Opening a new dimension: Economics

4. Numbers can be dodgy

5. Excellent presentation without any concrete matter

6. Human Capital makes the very foundation of a country

7. Development in the realm of ordinary citizen’s life

8. Recognition of Human part’s importance in economics

9. Satisfaction of citizens’ lead to long term development of country

10. Economic statistics: a mean, not an end

11. Conclusion

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Faiza it is a good initiative, I will love to participate in this activity because more you have healthy interaction more the scope of expanding one's views.

Water crisis and national unity

how water crisis endanger national unity?

• a threat to the economy(as water security, food security, and energy security inextricably linked).
• breed social unrest and health hazards (unemployment, poor socio-economic indicators etc)
• threat to the national integrity and security (internecine conflict among federating units and political exploitation of water share )

what are causes behind water crisis?
cross-border water resources

• climate change
• water management
• interprovincial hydro-politics
• changing the demography of the country

Measures to mitigate the water crisis
the solution should be three legs table.

• legal framework
• improved institutional structure
• adaptation of new technologies

conclusion

Its good to see you here..... I will share my outline on this topic shortly...... would love to see your outline on the topic shared by me.....

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Outline

Reasons behind Weak Democracy
Having no or late constitution after independence
Role of feudal


Poverty
unequal distribution of wealth
unemployment
corruption


Inflation, Overpopulation
lack of awareness about contraceptive medicine
poor social conditions and no family planning
urbanization


Illiteracy
little budget spent on education
feudalism is the biggest hindrance


Lack of consensus among provinces

Extremism

Economic crisis

Proxy wars played by foreign powers like USA


Conclusion

Water Scarcity and National Unity
1. Introduction (Opening and Thesis Statement)
2. Retrospection of water mismanagement
2.1. Indus Water Treaty and subsequent emergence of water scarcity
2.2. Civilian governments' ineptness to render water conservation strategies
2.3. Lack of unanimous national water policy
2.4. Interminable animosity between federal and provincial governments
3. The present natural calamities
3.1. Unpredictable climate extremes
3.2. Melting of glaciers and resultant flood crisis
3.3. Volcanic eruptions and eventual soil erosion
4. Agricultural issues
4.1. Waterlogging
4.2. Low crop yield and ultimate food insecurity
4.3. Lack of techniques to preserve surplus water flow
5. Industrial issues
5.1. Profuse wastage of groundwater for production/manufacturing
5.2. Huge profits of bottled water/water distributing companies
6. Other issues
6.1. Prevalence of diseases from importable water consumption
6.2. Scarcity of dams
6.3. Overpopulation
6.4 A long-simmering issues of Kalabagh dam
6.5 Lethargy of public to consume only required water
6.6 Unequal share of water for provinces and its diversion
7. How can national unity be achieved?
7.1. accountability of industrial (public and privately owned) companies
7.2. Construction of more dams
7.3. Plantation of more trees to reduce GHG emissions
7.4 Imposition of company tax for privately-owned companies
7.5. Installation of modern agricultural equipment
7.6. Voluntary family planning programs to prevent population growth
8. Conclusion

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Definitely, I will pen it.

Don't you think so that the way you drafted outline it seems more to do with water crisis and exhibits little link of the water scarcity with national unity?

Mean hereby, 'water scarcity' and 'national unity' are keywords so that one should construct the outline by explicitly revealing their intrinsic link which is so critical, as water scarcity endangers and threatens national unity and integrity. Afterward, one can mention the causes of the crisis and relevant solutions.

Good effort, having said that some appropriate choice of words can make your ideas and arguments more attractive and alive. For instance:

instead unequal distribution of wealth you can phrase economic disparity,
feudalism is the biggest hindrance you can be replace with terms like feudal and political elite, and
instead simply mention Illiteracy you can use the word which depicts more link with democracy and education such as the dearth of political consciousness among masses and so on .....
because the choice of words can change the whole game.
Moreover, some important points are missing such as:
the economic dependency of the electorate,
exclusion of the women from politic, in past which accounts half of the population,
institutional imbalance and encroachment,
politics without governance (just for the sake of power),
the interprovincial political fault.

Thesis statement
Indeed, the real development lies in the quality of human resource of the country, and economic statistics, on that part, are futile scale and pitfall to measure the development.
1. What is the real development
In the 21st century, development entails 4 major aspects.

• Equality
• Participation
• Empowerment
• Sustainability

2.Global race of development: a pitfall of economic figures and statics

• Is developed world is really developed? (west)
• How 'the rise of rest' entraps in the race of economic statics (India, China,
• Brazile etc)
• Is the 21st really going toward real development? (SDG of UN)

3. Pakistan in the era of development

THE development paradox of the Pakistan high- economic growth rate and poor socio-economic indicators.

• the high economic growth rate of 5.7% (32nd in the world and is being predicted have the potential to become the 10th largest economy of the world. ), but dismal human development status 147th in the world
  
• the education budget has ascended $780 million, but abysmal education status-58% literacy rate, 24 million students out of school
  
• Pakistan Army ranked as the World’s 13th most powerful military, but what about low social security

4. What went wrong on that part?

• politics without governance
• shrinking socio-economic opportunities and differential of access base on
• gender and geography
• institutional encroachment or imbalance
• lack of a clear vision of the power elite

5.how can the country (Pakistan) achieve real development?

the answer is simple and only:people-centric developmental approaches

• Pakistan has vast untapped potential and resource
• 60% of youth bulge should be the asset rather liability of the county
• invest
  
• Purposeful education which can meet to the tody's standards of earning of the livelihood (technical, scientific and vocational skills ) and to live (moral intellectual consciousness, and ethical and rational independent approach).
  
• A democracy with its integral part of good governance not merely elected representative: equitable distribution of benefit of growth and easy, low cost and speedy access to basic public services (health, education, food, justice, and shelter )
  
• the mega project like CPEC must be a game changer, in the real sense, for common people
  
  
• Adequately and strategically configure the country in modern globalized, digital revolutionized word and ripe the fruit of vital geostrategic location
  
• the contribution of media should be quality journalism, freedom and independence, justice, humaneness, and cultivating the social good

6.conclusion