Please review outline: Backwardness of woman is the backwardness of a nation
 

Thesis statement: A woman bears and rears the youth, the torch-bearers of progress and nation-builders of tomorrow
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Intro
The different faces of a woman
A mother upbringing youth
A wife supporting a husband and family
A daughter being the delight of the family/home
A sister
The 50% of the population
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Role in nation
1-As builders
..Upbringing youth
.. Inculcating morals
.. As equals, serving in numerous capacities be it as a teacher, SSP, advocate, judge, Senator, professor, doctor (active participant/ part of work force)
2-Effect of their backwardness (God forbid)
.. Moral depravity
.. Corrupted youth, (due to be their being) devoid of motherly love in their tender childhood years
.. Disregard of women of society by men (due to lack of womanly role model in child hood)
.. All the problems spawning from corrupted/premature youth
3- reasons for backwardness of woman
.. Misinterpretation of religion
.. Male dominance, old times ignorance
.. Unequal opportunities
.. Rampant ignorance in society and abysmal perceptions/notions regarding women
.. Ultra conservative mindset
.. Entangled in rigid+wrong+ pre Islamic customs (anti-woman ones)
4- recommendations
.. Preaching religion in line with latest happenings, rather than giving historical allusions
.. Engendering respect for woman, initiating programs to counter/address problems which lead to harassment/subjugation of women in society
.. Establishing counseling for women and events to boost their self esteem
.. Rights awareness campaigns coupled with follow up opportunities
.. Getting girls out of job mentality and empowering them through state programs, despite meagre income prospects
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Conclusion
The backwardness of a woman is not a mere case of gender disparity rather of the backwardness of a nation. Merely grasping at the straws won't suffice for the hurdles at hand.
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Please comment/criticize and also share points as to the link between woman and nation builder; I couldn't find much info on that. Thanks in advance

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Put the reasons before the effect. Secondly, is the mother in particular upbringing youth or the woman in general?

interesting topic
 

well just keep repeating the title and u will find more depth to it.

I see following way to present

Women in Family
Women in Society
Women in Entrepreneurship
Women in Jobs
Women in Politics
Women in Labour

Proper indenting and suboutlines add more depth.

Now the areas to comment are
Education
Empowerment/Liberty or participation in decisionmaking
Freedom both financial and career

Add references to status of women in Islam
comparison of women in first and third worlds

gradual awareness in female rights

Just keep relating parts of title in different combinations and u can add many dimensions.

feel free to get essay review as well.

[QUOTE=SikanderAbbasi;1078497]Put the reasons before the effect. Secondly, is the mother in particular upbringing youth or the woman in general?[/QUOTE]It is the mother in particular. Woman is implicitly helping. Just like all other humans.

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I love the way you've imparted advice. Kind of exactly what I was looking for. Jazakallah[QUOTE=goldenravian;1082011]well just keep repeating the title and u will find more depth to it.

I see following way to present

Women in Family
Women in Society
Women in Entrepreneurship
Women in Jobs
Women in Politics
Women in Labour

Proper indenting and suboutlines add more depth.

Now the areas to comment are
Education
Empowerment/Liberty or participation in decisionmaking
Freedom both financial and career

Add references to status of women in Islam
comparison of women in first and third worlds

gradual awareness in female rights

Just keep relating parts of title in different combinations and u can add many dimensions.

feel free to get essay review as well.[/QUOTE]

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