Population explosion is a real threat to Pakistan. (outline)

[Theodosius]

1 Introduction
1.1 Limited human resources
1.2 What is population explosion?
1.3 Real threat to Pakistan is overpopulation due to its multidimensional
impacts

2 Evidences of alarming level of population in Pakistan
1.1 Historical trends
1.2 Comparison of Pakistan's growth rate with other countries.

3 How population outburst is a real challenge to Pakistan?
3.1 Food security in context of Malthusian theory.
3.2 Threat to economic growth
3.3 Deteriorating environment
3.4 Our use of resources
3.5 Increasing unemployment
3.6 Extra strain on health system
3.7 Decreasing standards of education
3.8 Dissolution of development budget.

4 Way out for population challenge
4.1 Revival of population welfare programme.
4.2 Women empowerment
5 Conclusion

Seniors and members are requested to evaluate.

[SikanderAbbasi]

Outlines

Introduction
The population of Pakistan has swelled to 208 at the last count
2.4 per cent growth per year in relative terms, as per Pakistan Bureau of Statistics (PBS)

Thesis Statement
The repercussions of an ever-expanding population are manifold. Ensuring economic growth and zero poverty is preceded by population control. Therefore, a sensible roadmap to control population growth entails efforts from the state as well as those from the general populace.

Adverse effects of population growth on Economy
1. Rising inflation rate
2. Excess in tax evasion
3. Depletion of edible/portable resources
4. Unequal distribution of wealth and generation of revenue

Adverse effects on social life
1. Increase in malnutrition, stunted growth
2. Increase in infant mortality
3. Gender inequality regarding access to education and employment opportunities
4. Health constraints
5. More urbanization, squeezing density
6. Social schism and insecurity

A Sensible Roadmap
1. Establishment of family planning centres and programs
2. Utilization of untapped agricultural resources to feed all mouths
3. Egalitarian healthcare facilities
4. Introduction of contraceptives by through women welfare associations and by consulting capable religious clerics
5. Imposition of a criminal act against deforestation

[wahabfahad]

Originally Posted by Theodosius

1 Introduction
1.1 Limited human resources
1.2 What is population explosion?
1.3 Real threat to Pakistan is overpopulation due to its multidimensional
impacts

2 Evidences of alarming level of population in Pakistan
1.1 Historical trends
1.2 Comparison of Pakistan's growth rate with other countries.

3 How population outburst is a real challenge to Pakistan?
3.1 Food security in context of Malthusian theory.
3.2 Threat to economic growth
3.3 Deteriorating environment
3.4 Our use of resources
3.5 Increasing unemployment
3.6 Extra strain on health system
3.7 Decreasing standards of education
3.8 Dissolution of development budget.

4 Way out for population challenge
4.1 Revival of population welfare programme.
4.2 Women empowerment
5 Conclusion

Seniors and members are requested to evaluate.

Re-write 3.3, 3.4, and 3.8, as they cannot convey your idea clearly.

Way-out: Good.

[wahabfahad]

Originally Posted by SikanderAbbasi

Outlines

Introduction
The population of Pakistan has swelled to 208 at the last count
2.4 per cent growth per year in relative terms, as per Pakistan Bureau of Statistics (PBS)

Thesis Statement
The repercussions of an ever-expanding population are manifold. Ensuring economic growth and zero poverty is preceded by population control. Therefore, a sensible roadmap to control population growth entails efforts from the state as well as those from the general populace.

Adverse effects of population growth on Economy
1. Rising inflation rate
2. Excess in tax evasion
3. Depletion of edible/portable resources
4. Unequal distribution of wealth and generation of revenue

Adverse effects on social life
1. Increase in malnutrition, stunted growth
2. Increase in infant mortality
3. Gender inequality regarding access to education and employment opportunities
4. Health constraints
5. More urbanization, squeezing density
6. Social schism and insecurity

A Sensible Roadmap
1. Establishment of family planning centres and programs
2. Utilization of untapped agricultural resources to feed all mouths
3. Egalitarian healthcare facilities
4. Introduction of contraceptives by through women welfare associations and by consulting capable religious clerics
5. Imposition of a criminal act against deforestation

Dear, point 2 in both economy and social life; and point 2 and 5 in roadmap seems irrelevant.

Thesis statement: Great.

PS: It's my opinion. You may disagree.

[SikanderAbbasi]

Originally Posted by wahabfahad

Dear, point 2 in both economy and social life; and point 2 and 5 in roadmap seems irrelevant.

Thesis statement: Great.

PS: It's my opinion. You may disagree.

Irrelevant? are you serious dear? population explosion is a threat to both our economy and our social life. Population explosion is a vast term which has widened aspects and effects on the country's socio-economic life.

[wahabfahad]

Originally Posted by SikanderAbbasi

Irrelevant? are you serious dear? population explosion is a threat to both our economy and our social life. Population explosion is a vast term which has widened aspects and effects on the country's socio-economic life.

Dear, you haven't read my post properly. Read it again. I'm talking about mentioned points, not whole heading of economy and social life.

[wahabfahad]

Originally Posted by SikanderAbbasi

Irrelevant? are you serious dear? population explosion is a threat to both our economy and our social life. Population explosion is a vast term which has widened aspects and effects on the country's socio-economic life.

Tax evasion; mortality; untapped; deforestation.

Talking about these points.

If you think, they are relevant, then justify it here, but briefly.

It's your test now. ☺

[dufersne]

Originally Posted by SikanderAbbasi

Irrelevant? are you serious dear? population explosion is a threat to both our economy and our social life. Population explosion is a vast term which has widened aspects and effects on the country's socio-economic life.

Learn to accept your shortcoming because that is the only way to improve your skill. He has rightly pointed out your irrelevancy. Remaining to the point and relevant is key to success in Essay. Believe me, even small details matter....