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Hello, this is my outline as best as I can remember it. The remedial measures of course had more points, I just can't recall them. I took a fairly romanticized view of the topic, rather than getting into the nitty-gritty of the economic, political, social etc impacts of education as a whole. My mother is a Montessori directress and I've attended many workshops detailing the importance of a "good" classroom environment and overall experience for the proper development of a child. I used that to advantage and laced a good many Maria Montessori quotes throughout. There are a lot of things I wish I could change, but I'm overall fairly satisfied with how it went.



1. Introduction
2. Classrooms: Historical and contemporary examples of their role in nation building (Examples of student participation in Pakistan movement, and for the current examples US Parkland shooting survivors rallies on gun control, Swedish schoolgirl Greta Thunberg and her voicing climate change concerns and the French yellow vest movement which is also now being taken up by students for school reforms)
3. Role of classroom in nation building
3.1 socialization
3.2 personality development
3.3 evolution and development of ideas and values
3.4 creativity and innovation
3.5 Transmission of knowledge
4. Hallmarks of a conducive learning environment
4.1 Child-centered
4.2 Participative
4.3 Holistic development
5. Case study of Pakistan: How our classrooms are perpetuating our social, political and economic problems.
6. Remedial measures
7. Conclusion
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Topic: Classrooms decide the future of the nation

Thesis Statement: Education is responsible for the success of a nation, as it influences the socio-cultural, political and commercial development of the nation.

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1. Introduction
2. Philosophy of John Dewey on Education
3. Education and Social Development
  • i. Development of Critical Thinking
  • ii. Curb on Extremism
  • iii. Rights of Women
  • iv. Moral and Civic Sense
  • v. Diversity of Professions
4. Role of Education in Political and Administrative Sphere
  • i. Democracy Flourishes
  • ii. Rule of Law
  • iii. Meritocracy
5. Relation of Education with Economic Sector
  • i. Equal Opportunities for all
  • ii. Environment Protection
6. Conclusion



Comments: Wrote around 1800-1900 words essay. I had 4-5 more points which I couldn't add due to the shortage of time. Please evaluate.

Very well attempted.You have justified clearly all that is required by the topic But, I suppose, you have missed the future part of role of education. By the way, best of luck ahead.

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Good Outline but I think you need to be more relevant.
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CLASSROOMS DECIDE THE FUTURE OF THE NATION

1) Introduction
a) Three sets of education (Classrooms )
b) Geography, economy, technology and classrooms decide the future of the nation
2) Equality is out of the system
a) No level-playing field for job markets
b) Women and madrassa students alienated
3) Policy problems
a) Unregulated curricula
b) Material disagreement
4) Technical problems
a) Rote memorization
b) Stress breeding instruction methods
5) Yuval Noah Harari's views on education
a) Teach four Cs
b) Classrooms offer new ideas
6) Reforms framework
a) Role of HEC and clerics
b) Uniform curriculum
7) Conclusion

Smiling geography, fat economy, innovative technology and strategic brilliance awake the nations with whoosh. And classrooms decide the future of the nation with swoosh. .
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Thus concludes Lon Watters " school is a building which has four walls with tomorrow inside ".

I attempted it at home, in examination hall I wrote on Expanding IT: blessing or curse.
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As I am receiving a lot of emails about the score I got in my Essay paper, I got 8 marks. I also appeared in 2018 and got 30 marks in essay with very little prep. This time I wrote 12+ essays and got them checked by a known CSS essay teacher. I showed him this outline and he was confident that I would pass in essay. I don't know what I did wrong. All I know is that CSS depends 99% on luck.
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I wrote an essay on this topic and got only 27 marks. in 2018, with no preparation, I got 32 marks. I think my stance, thesis statement, was inaccurate. is there anyone who has passed this essay?
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I wrote an essay on this topic and got only 27 marks. in 2018, with no preparation, I got 32 marks. I think my stance, thesis statement, was inaccurate. is there anyone who has passed this essay?
I attempted this topic and cleared the exam.
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