The classrooms decide the future of the nation
 

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Outline
1: Introduction
2: Thesis Statement: The education shapes the destiny of the nation because it helps economic uplifting, get out of moral crisis and make informed decision in life.
3: How does the education shape the destiny of a nation?
a. Helps make informed decision
b. Provides with the skills
c. Moral Uplifting
d. Less crimes with the higher literacy rate, e.g Scandinavian Countries
e. provides with the means to earn livelihood
4: How can illiteracy have devastating effect on nations?
a. Terrorism and crime : Soviet Invasion of Afghanistan and illiterate people
b. Low living standards of people: Developing states
5:Scenario of our country
6: Way Forward
7:Conclusion

[QUOTE=sajid abbas;1087408]Please review my rough outline of the essay and provide me with the your valuable feedback. Thanks in advance
Outline
1: Introduction
2: Thesis Statement: The education shapes the destiny of the nation because it helps economic uplifting, get out of moral crisis and make informed decision in life.
3: How does the education shape the destiny of a nation?
a. Helps make informed decision
b. Provides with the skills
c. Moral Uplifting
d. Less crimes with the higher literacy rate, e.g Scandinavian Countries
e. provides with the means to earn livelihood
4: How can illiteracy have devastating effect on nations?
a. Terrorism and crime : Soviet Invasion of Afghanistan and illiterate people
b. Low living standards of people: Developing states
5:Scenario of our country
6: Way Forward
7:Conclusion[/QUOTE]

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TOPIC: CLASSROOMS DECIDE THE FUTURE OF THE NATION:

OUTLINE:
1. Introduction
(i) Classrooms as representation of formal education
(ii) What is formal education?
(iii) Relationship between the future of the nation and the formal education

2. How Classrooms Decide the Future of the Nation

(i) Formal education imparts unity which is essential for prosperous future of nation
(ii) Economic progress of the nation depends on its formal education through classrooms
(iii) Scientific development as backbone for the bright future of nation is achievable through formal education through classrooms
(iv) Formal education imparts rational approach
(v) Classroom education decide the tolerance level of the nation which decides its future
(vi) Poverty percentage decides the future of the nation which depends on formal education
(vii) Political stability of the nation requires literate masses
(viii) Extremism in the nation depends on the performance of the educational institutes which decides the future of the nation
(ix) Formal education as weapon against social evils to ensure prosperous future of the nation
(x) Formal education decides the cultural outlook of the nation
(xi) Formal education through class room develops the counter-narrative during hybrid warfare

3. How to improve the formal education in Pakistan for its bright future
(i) Vibrant educational policy
(ii) Curb on plagiarism for higher education
(iii) Revision of the curriculum
(iv) Training of teachers
(v) Enhancing the educational budget

4. Conclusion

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[QUOTE=sajid abbas;1087408]Please review my rough outline of the essay and provide me with the your valuable feedback. Thanks in advance
Outline
1: Introduction
2: Thesis Statement: The education shapes the destiny of the nation because it helps economic uplifting, get out of moral crisis and make informed decision in life.
3: How does the education shape the destiny of a nation?
a. Helps make informed decision
b. Provides with the skills
c. Moral Uplifting
d. Less crimes with the higher literacy rate, e.g Scandinavian Countries
e. provides with the means to earn livelihood
4: How can illiteracy have devastating effect on nations?
a. Terrorism and crime : Soviet Invasion of Afghanistan and illiterate people
b. Low living standards of people: Developing states
5:Scenario of our country
6: Way Forward
7:Conclusion[/QUOTE]
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