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Are Modern wars not holy wars? (CSS 2017)

1. Introduction
2. Difference between modern wars and holy wars.
3. How modern wars are not holy wars?
• Economic interests of USA in Iraq of extracting oil resources
• Strategic interests of USA in Afghanistan
• Russia's geo political interests in Syria
• Yemen war undermining Saudi's hegemonic role in the region
• Competition in Indian ocean of US, India and China due to strategic importance
• South china sea conflict is over natural resources and strategic interests of China but not on religious grounds
• Trade war of US - China due to economic growth of China
4. Pragmatic suggestions to avert modern wars:
• Promoting globalization to diminish current rivalries
• Enhancing economic interdependence of countries through liberal economic policies
• WTO must play effective role to settle economic disputes to fade away shadows of modern wars
5. Conclusion
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In CSS and PMS papers more important is HOW YOU ARE WRITING and not what you are writing?
You should be more focused on the selection of suitable words. This does not mean that you should use difficult words. What it mean is that you should use suitable words, words that makes the sentence more attractive than usual, even if these words are simple and common in use.
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Are Modern wars not holy wars? (CSS 2017)

1. Introduction
2. Difference between modern wars and holy wars.
3. How modern wars are not holy wars?
• Economic interests of USA in Iraq of extracting oil resources
• Strategic interests of USA in Afghanistan
• Russia's geo political interests in Syria
• Yemen war undermining Saudi's hegemonic role in the region
• Competition in Indian ocean of US, India and China due to strategic importance
• South china sea conflict is over natural resources and strategic interests of China but not on religious grounds
• Trade war of US - China due to economic growth of China
4. Pragmatic suggestions to avert modern wars:
• Promoting globalization to diminish current rivalries
• Enhancing economic interdependence of countries through liberal economic policies
• WTO must play effective role to settle economic disputes to fade away shadows of modern wars
5. Conclusion
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Are Modern wars not holy wars? (CSS 2017)

1. Introduction
2. Difference between modern wars and holy wars.
3. How modern wars are not holy wars?
• Economic interests of USA in Iraq of extracting oil resources
• Strategic interests of USA in Afghanistan
• Russia's geo political interests in Syria
• Yemen war undermining Saudi's hegemonic role in the region
• Competition in Indian ocean of US, India and China due to strategic importance
• South china sea conflict is over natural resources and strategic interests of China but not on religious grounds
• Trade war of US - China due to economic growth of China
4. Pragmatic suggestions to avert modern wars:
• Promoting globalization to diminish current rivalries
• Enhancing economic interdependence of countries through liberal economic policies
• WTO must play effective role to settle economic disputes to fade away shadows of modern wars
5. Conclusion
Hi mirmuhd,

First of, I would like to see what points you add in the 2nd heading, and how you define holy wars because as I see it, that will be the pivot of your discussion. Secondly, in your 3rd heading, first give argument and then give example. You are giving examples to make a point which I think is not a very effective strategy. So for example, you can write that:
Modern wars are fought to maintain hegemony. And then give the example of Yemen-Saudi-led coalition war.

My way of writing an essay is to always include a thesis statement. I think if this essay has it as well that will make it more strong and compact.
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First of, I would like to see what points you add in the 2nd heading, and how you define holy wars because as I see it, that will be the pivot of your discussion. Secondly, in your 3rd heading, first give argument and then give example. You are giving examples to make a point which I think is not a very effective strategy. So for example, you can write that:

Modern wars are fought to maintain hegemony. And then give the example of Yemen-Saudi-led coalition war.



My way of writing an essay is to always include a thesis statement. I think if this essay has it as well that will make it more strong and compact.
Thank you @Asuna for suggesting workable strategy.

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