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Democracy and illiteracy do not move together.

1. Introduction.
2. Essentials of democracy.
>Good governance
>Rule of law
>Transparency and accountability
>Economic development
>Protection of fundamental human rights
3. Democracy and illiteracy can never be co-existent.
4. Illiteracy invites a number of problems and issues.
A) Social problems
>Social injustices
>Poverty
>Gender inequalities
>Social subjugation of people
B) Administrative and Political problems.
>Tarnishes rule of law
>Devastation of transparency and accountability
>Political fragmentation and disunity among politicians on various major issues
C) Economic issues that illiteracy brings.
>Unemployment
>Hinders economic development and growth
>Economic deprivation of people by offering them less employment opportunities
D)Other issues that illiteracy invites
>Brings violence in the society
>Threat to regional as well as world's peace
>violation of fundamental human rights
5. Literacy makes a good match and perfect combination to democracy.
6. Conclusion.