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Topic: Violence is the last resort/refuge of incompetent

Outline:
1. Introduction
2. Domestic violence in family[LIST][*]Husband to wife[*]Father to son[*]Mother in law and daughter in law[/LIST]3. Schools in developing countries
4. Terrorist organizations
5. India-Kashmir
6. Israel-Palestine
7. Modern democratic states[LIST][*]USA in Iraq[*]USA in Afghanistan[/LIST]8. Dictators' incompetence[LIST][*]Napoleon's incompetence [*]Hitler's incompetence [/LIST]9. Effects of violence
10. Conclusion

Failure at some level compels incompetent people to do something bad out of frustration. Competent people learn from failure while incompetent people resort to violence. Self aggrandizement and ego push them to take measures which are not legalized by society. They take such steps to satisfy their damaged ego. For them, every act of them has a reason, but their methods are perfectly rejected by the society. From the domestic cases to multinational organizations, and from small administrative units to modern democratic states, there have been cases of violence adoption. The incompetent people beat some one in the family sometimes, or in some cases they join terrorist organizations. Success of others make then jealous and ultimately they become beast in the garb of human. They disgrace others by all means. They use measures to terrorise masses, they use fear as a potent tool for their mental satisfaction. In fact, incompetent people deny logic and reasoning and remain glued to their ego.