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1) Introduction: Thesis: With the return of peace in Pakistan owing to sacrifices of its resillience nation and front-line law force agencies, its ripe time for Pakistan to promote tourism in Pakistan by mitigating the challenges that will put a major chunk of revenue in its economy.

2) Background of Legacy of one and half decade terrorism hampering tourism in Pakistan
3) Prospects of Tourism in Pakistan
a) Religious Tourism for Sikhs- Kartarpur Corridor
b) Religious Tourism opportunities for Hindus (in AJ&K and other areas)
c) Religious Tourism for Budhists
d) Tourism sites in KPK, AJ&K & Northern areas
e) Cultural sites in Punjab (Mughal architecture etc)
f) Cultural and Heritage Sites in Sindh ( Sufi shrines, Mohen Jo Darho)
g) potential of coastal areas in Balochistan to be the World's famous beaches
h) Gawadar the future hub of Cultural Tourism in Pakistan: "Dubai like City- maritime stopover point for maritime trade and tourists
i) case studies of Turkey, Malaysia, Maldives

3) Challenges of Tourism in Pakistan
a) Weak Economy, no focus on infrastructural developments leading to Tourism sites
b) Still weak Structure of Tourism sites than its potentials
c) Lack of Hoteling Facilities of like 3 & 4 star Hotels at these Tourist sites i.e KPK
d) Legacy of Terrorism and Regional Powers Interplay in Pakistan through non-state actors that may sabotage the peace return
e) Lack of Soft Image Projection of Pakistan

4) Way Forward:
a) here is Summarised the paragraph to attract FDI for these cultural sites developments, upgrading hoteling facilities, soft image projection of Pakistan through media, showbiz, sports etc;

5) Conclusion:



Can anyone give serious opinion about this which I have written in Essay CSS 2020........
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I forgot the two key areas to write down in paper:
visa on arrival
promotion by social media


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A good one, still that could have been far better by adding the following thoughts to your essay....
Sports tourism
Tourism guide
Food festivals
Religious harmony and etc
Some current data pertaining to tourism e.g.
Restart of flight of British Airways in Pakistan
Number of tourists visited last year
Ministry of tourism and
And tourism based tv channel ?

In challenges the biggest ones are
Religious intolerance and
Cultural barriers

In opportunities one must have highlighted the ratio of tourism adding to GDP and labour force and employment opportunities. Finally one could conclude that promoting tourism is the key in establishing peace in Pakistan.
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I interpreted "Opportunities" as "Benefits" of tourism and wrote about how it can generate FDI, promote soft image, create new employment opportunities for local people, develop infrastructure etc. I didn't write about the potential of tourism such as sports tourism, historical places etc. I guess the examiner will fail my essay straight away ?
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I interpreted "Opportunities" as "Benefits" of tourism and wrote about how it can generate FDI, promote soft image, create new employment opportunities for local people, develop infrastructure etc. I didn't write about the potential of tourism such as sports tourism, historical places etc. I guess the examiner will fail my essay straight away ?
I think you got it right. Opertunities here refer to the benefits and prospects. However, it would have been superb if you have mentioned litttle bit about the potential of tourism i. e religious, culture, sports etc. But still u have covered the topic completely and you will clear it i. A.

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It was about “Promoting Tourism in Pakistan: Opportunities and Challenges”.
DrAnjumZia you did great MashAllah.
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my thesis statement would have looked like this: Pakistan has great opportunities to promote its tourism industry despite some challenges which can be solved through proper planning.
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Thanks, let's hope the examiner have same views Sir..........
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