Great Nations Win Without Fighting | Essay Outline
 

Outline:

1) Introduction

Thesis Statement:

Undoubtedly, war brings many perils, hinders the way of efficient national progress and This leaves a nation in a multi-fold socio-economic and political crisis. Contrastingly, the policy of No-war and peaceful competition, along with cooperation, bring promising prospects for Sustainable national growth makes a country dignified and great in the comity of nations.

2) Perils of War

A. Unjustifiable Outcomes
B. War crimes
C. Humanitarian Crisis
D. Human Rights Infringement
E. Infrastructure Destruction
Economic Recession
G. Stalled Developments
H. Pre-calculations It is impossible.
I. War-way towards Self Annihilation
J. Diplomatic channels cease
K. War-a total loss



3) Policy of Great Nations

A. Peaceful Dispute Resolution
B. Diplomatic pursuance of issues
C. Bilateral and Multilateral Engagement
D. China's peaceful growth model
E. Economic Progression:
F. Soft power: a key policy tool
G. Investing in education


4) In quest of being a great nation

A. Say no to warmongering policies.
B. Band wagoning trade race
C. Liberal Economic Policies
D. International Engagements
E. Opting for the Win-Win route
F. Role of leadership
I. Investment in Human Resource Development
H. Pursuing a sustainable growth model


5) Conclusion

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[QUOTE=Faaiz shah;1125468]Outline:

1) Introduction

Thesis Statement:

Undoubtedly, war brings many perils, hinders the way of efficient national progress and This leaves a nation in a multi-fold socio-economic and political crisis. Contrastingly, the policy of No-war and peaceful competition, along with cooperation, bring promising prospects for Sustainable national growth makes a country dignified and great in the comity of nations.

2) Perils of War

A. Unjustifiable Outcomes
B. War crimes
C. Humanitarian Crisis
D. Human Rights Infringement
E. Infrastructure Destruction
Economic Recession
G. Stalled Developments
H. Pre-calculations It is impossible.
I. War-way towards Self Annihilation
J. Diplomatic channels cease
K. War-a total loss



3) Policy of Great Nations

A. Peaceful Dispute Resolution
B. Diplomatic pursuance of issues
C. Bilateral and Multilateral Engagement
D. China's peaceful growth model
E. Economic Progression:
F. Soft power: a key policy tool
G. Investing in education


4) In quest of being a great nation

A. Say no to warmongering policies.
B. Band wagoning trade race
C. Liberal Economic Policies
D. International Engagements
E. Opting for the Win-Win route
F. Role of leadership
I. Investment in Human Resource Development
H. Pursuing a sustainable growth model


5) Conclusion

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Make sure you dont have any grammatical mistakes atleast in your thesis statement. I am not an expert myself; I am still in a learning phase, but I noticed some of grammatical errors in your thesis statement, which may very well may be wrong as I said I'm not an expert.

[B]war brings many perils[I], and[/I] hinders the way of efficient national progress[/B]. They are two independent clauses and should be joined by a coordinating conjunction.

[B][I];[/I] This leaves a nation in a multi-fold socio-economic and political crisis.[/B] Use of semicolon would be better here.

[B][I]brings[/I] promising prospects for Sustainable national growth[/B]. Policy is singular.

[B]makes a country dignified and great in the comity of nations.[/B] Choice of words doesnt seem right. Moreover, use semicolon after national growth or a comma along with coordinating conjunction.