"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I’ll defend to the death your right to say it....."



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*) "I do not agree with what you have to say, but I’ll defend to the death your right to say it"



1)Introduction
1.1) What does this quotation mean? (100 words)
1.2) Thesis statement

2) What are the concepts highlighted in this quotation?

2.1) Encouragement for speaking up (100 words)
2.2) Right of expressing views (100 words)
2.3) Awareness against suppression (100 words)
2.4) Protection for feeble (100 words)
2.5) Campaign to stand up (100 words)

3) Which major issues can be resolved and treated successfully by implementing this quotation and how?

3.1) Child labour (create Awareness) (100 words)
3.2) Education of women (Speak about the importance of education for women) (100 words)
3.3) Mental health issues (create awareness through speeches) (100 words)
3.4) Usage of plastic (Highlighting it's disadvantages) (100 words)
3.5) High consumption of demerit goods (Physical and mental harmfulness) (100 words)

4) Which are the respected occupants who implement this quotation as their duty and how?

4.1) Journalists (Through the articles and and news they write) (100 words)
4.2) Politicians (Through their speech and actions) (100 words)
4.3) Public speakers (encourage people to speak) (100 words)
4.4) Unions (For instance trade union (they speak up for rights) (100 words)
4.5) Social media influencers (with their powerful words) (100 words)

5) What are the consequences if there is no implementation to this quotation?

5.1) Increase in fear in local community (100 words)
5.2) Increase in crimes (100 words)
5.3) Lack of peace(100 words)
5.4) Loss of lives (100 words)
5.5) Increase in troubles for leaders (100 words)

6) Conclusion (100 words

Dear Laiba,

You have written a nice outline, incorporating so many aspects of the topic. However, like so many others, no one in here posts a complete essay. As per my experience, essays are not just how much a topic is covered. It is more related to how do you put the essay as a complete piece of writing that could influence or impress someone.

One of the most important aspects of the essay is that reader should be able to read it without feeling any hiccups. For example, "Encouragement for speaking up" may go like "Society must act and teach its members to speak up for one's right"...now this statement should be connected to the "Right of expressing views" by such connector like "However, to do that a society must respect one's right to express her views".

You can see that connectors give smoothness to the flow of ideas and it doesn't feel bumpy where two ideas get connected.

Overall, I find nothing much to criticize, however, it is always a good idea to share one's outlines along with a complete essay for a critical analysis.

Thank you so vvvvv much my respected mentor it really means alot slot to me I'll surely keep in mind your point and will improve InshaAllah InshaAllah once again innunerablyyy thankful to u