"Universal Human Equality is Utopic"

Thesis Statement: On Dec 10, 1948, the Universal Declaration of Human Rights was unanimously adopted. A century later, human equality still remains a fictional reality.


1. Introduction

2. The origin & assimilation of Human Equality
2.1. John Locke & Human Equality (French Republic/American Declaration of Independence)
2.2. UDHR- translated in more than 500 languages.

2.2.1. Blueprint for more than 70+ human rights treaties.

2.3. Human Equality & Islam
2.3.1. The Last Sermon of H.P
2.3.2. Women's Rights & the Protection of minorities


3. What constitutes Equality- the pursuit of life, liberty, and happiness.
3.1 Freedom of Press
3.2 Protection of minorities (the clash of nationalism)
3.3 Equality among all nations

4. The Current State of Human Equality
4.1 Imperialism & Colonization of the Western World
4.2. Extrajudicial killings and ethnic cleansing (the case of Rwanda, Bosnia, Nazi Germany)
4.3. The plight of Muslims and the clash of civilization

5. Protection of Human Equality
5.1. United Nations and its organs
5.2. Amnesty International
5.3. Human Rights Watch
5.4 The Role of Social Media & Other media outlets


6. Conclusion

I think there is a problem with thesis statement, it is so specific, you bounds it with UNDHR, and in essay you have to bound to this very point...but in outline it is in the last heading...

And put Islam above western philosophers.

Your points are good.. Make a general thesis statement and organize the outline with respect to priority basis of the points mentioned,

One more thing, write some points in your intro and conclusion as well..
Hope so it may help..