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hi seniors
i need ur help plz, regarding an essay
as i apeared in css 09, bt coudnt qualify
i attemptd "Pakistan's war against terror n its impact on ......."

it was an easy essay coz it was related to my subject
bt one thing wich i pointed out is this , that my whole essay was u can say 'anti-govt"
criticising govt policies n establishment.

now i want to know frm u people that wt are the points n arguments wich can make this topic govt friendley,wt are its positive effects for pakistan?
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Like appreciate Government's role.
Salute to army sacrifices.
Operations in tribal areas,
Curbing militancy BY force,
also you can include IDP,S chapter although it was total govt failure but there in paper you will defend the steps taken by govt to stabilize the displaced families.

Dont go anti govt,specially anti army,there in css you have to tell lie alot to score more and more....
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hi seniors
i need ur help plz, regarding an essay
as i apeared in css 09, bt coudnt qualify
i attemptd "Pakistan's war against terror n its impact on ......."

it was an easy essay coz it was related to my subject
bt one thing wich i pointed out is this , that my whole essay was u can say 'anti-govt"
criticising govt policies n establishment.

now i want to know frm u people that wt are the points n arguments wich can make this topic govt friendley,wt are its positive effects for pakistan?
plz help

whether u go anti-govt or pro-govt,one thing u shud always keep in mind that u hv to support your arguments with logic and wisdom and not with gossips and conspiracy theories.u failed in the essay just bcoz u cud not put substantive material and thoughtfull ideas that cud attract the lover of the wisdom.
some other causes can also be,such as:
disorganised paragraphs;
grammatical slips;
spelling mistakes;
irrelevat ideas;
unbalanced approach;
no constructivism;
monotonous introduction and conclusion ; and so on and so forth.
thatz what i say honey.
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thnx for ur suggestions, one thing i must say wich i concluded frm my this experience, that its v tricky to go in favor of a wrong thing while attemptng paper,
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What according to you are the most expected topics for coming exam.And what about national integration as it has been ignoring since 2003 .
Moreover,do you have the above pepared essay or not?
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thnx for ur suggestions, one thing i must say wich i concluded frm my this experience, that its v tricky to go in favor of a wrong thing while attemptng paper,
yes its a tricky and demanding job.
but your essay should also not lack analysis.analysis is the flesh and soul of any essay.no matter how anti-govt (not anti-state) your essay is,it shud end with some constructive approach.
u can go anti-govt, but never try to go anti-state.never be a radical and separatist.
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@frmQAU, u rite that we shud nt lack prper analysis , n i tthink in this essay the whole body of it rely on analytical approach , perhaps there may be any mistake in my analysis, wel for the next time i will try to do sumthing beter than it.

@ mashal khan , no i havnt thie essay in compiled form , its in scattered form i prepared it frm my notes n lectures of i.r n also took sum help frm internet to add the new moves of this war
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@frmQAU, u rite that we shud nt lack prper analysis , n i tthink in this essay the whole body of it rely on analytical approach , perhaps there may be any mistake in my analysis, wel for the next time i will try to do sumthing beter than it.

@ mashal khan , no i havnt thie essay in compiled form , its in scattered form i prepared it frm my notes n lectures of i.r n also took sum help frm internet to add the new moves of this war
u prepared it from the lectures of IR.
Good.
may i know who delivered these lectures to u?
u r from any university or any css preparation academy?
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according to dr shahid chairman of KIPS academy,you should not suppose to write anything against govt and military,moreover,he also advised not to go beyond the limits if you have,nt enough information regarding the topic..
and one thing i leant from seniors that never criticize an event,occassion or topic unless u have strong background knowledge.To sumup in css exam criticism always produce bad resultz..
fromQAU and Mariam..plz say something about national integration...if possibale mention outlines and will try to write on it.
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plz chek out the link, i think it wil help u regarding 'national intgration'

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...ractise-7.html
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