Comment: Corruption - Causes and consquences / impacts
 

Assalam o Allaikoum wrwb,,,
all moderators, award receivers and seniors kindly comment on this outline. Looking forward for healthy discussion.

[B]CORRUPTION______ IT'S CAUSES AND CONSEQUENCES/IMPACTS[/B]

• [B]Introduction[/B]
• [B]Affects of Corruption on People's lives
• Causes of Corruption[/B]
1. Low and Irregular Salaries
2. Availability of multiple opportunities for personal enrichment
3. Access to and control over means of Corruption
4. Limited risks of exposure and punishment
5. Weakness in Religious belief (in case of Islamic society)
6. Un-practicing of Anti-Corruption laws

• [B]Impacts/Consequences of Corruption

• Social Impacts[/B]
1. Increase in Organized Crime
2. Violation of human rights
3. Devastating impact on environment
4. Corruptions perpetuates poverty
5. Bring bad image for country

• [B]Economical Impacts[/B]
1. Delays/Disturbs growth and Development
2. Decrease in private Sector Development
3. Discourage Foreign Direct Investment (FDI)
4. Undermines flow of Aid & Development assistance

• [B]Religious Impacts (in case of Islamic society)[/B]
1. Doing against Islamic Teachings

• [B]Measures to overcome Corruption[/B]
1. Strictly enforcement of Anti-Corruption Laws
2. Giving relief to low paid officials
3. Bringing uncorrupt leaders & executives to government
4. Creating sense to recognize corruption as (unIslamic) immoral evil
5. Giving punishment on exposure of Corruption

• [B]Conclusion[/B]

nayab!

plz add the folowing.

lack of accountability,
improper policy xecution,
not severity but certainty of punishment.

try to add facts n figures e.g ECONOMIC SEVEY OF PAKISTAN & recent TRANSPARENCY INTERNATIONAL REPORTS as well.

best of luck.

GOVT should adopt holistic policies not individual based, NRO,new accountability bill 2009,role of NAB(act 1999) etc etc:shy

[QUOTE=Nayab123;162912]Assalam o Allaikoum wrwb,,,
all moderators, award receivers and seniors kindly comment on this outline. Looking forward for healthy discussion.

[B]CORRUPTION______ IT'S CAUSES AND CONSEQUENCES/IMPACTS[/B]

• [B]Introduction[/B]
• [B]Affects of Corruption on People's lives
• Causes of Corruption[/B]
1. Low and Irregular Salaries
2. Availability of multiple opportunities for personal enrichment
3. Access to and control over means of Corruption
4. Limited risks of exposure and punishment
5. Weakness in Religious belief (in case of Islamic society)
6. Un-practicing of Anti-Corruption laws

• [B]Impacts/Consequences of Corruption

• Social Impacts[/B]
1. Increase in Organized Crime
2. Violation of human rights
3. Devastating impact on environment
4. Corruptions perpetuates poverty
5. Bring bad image for country

• [B]Economical Impacts[/B]
1. Delays/Disturbs growth and Development
2. Decrease in private Sector Development
3. Discourage Foreign Direct Investment (FDI)
4. Undermines flow of Aid & Development assistance

• [B]Religious Impacts (in case of Islamic society)[/B]
1. Doing against Islamic Teachings

• [B]Measures to overcome Corruption[/B]
1. Strictly enforcement of Anti-Corruption Laws
2. Giving relief to low paid officials
3. Bringing uncorrupt leaders & executives to government
4. Creating sense to recognize corruption as (unIslamic) immoral evil
5. Giving punishment on exposure of Corruption

• [B]Conclusion[/B][/QUOTE]

a.o.a.,
We we talk about corruption,we should make it clear in the beginning that corruption can't be eliminated but efforts should be made to reduce it.Since inception,corruption has been haunting the socio-cultural and political systems of all the cultures and civilizations.Today,corruption is even more a daunting challenge and more visible phenomenon too.The rapid globalization and the convenient availability of information sources dont let corruption go unnoticed.
The topic of the essay can be divided into three parts:
a-Corruption
b-causes
c-consequences

So,first of all cover all the aspects of Corruption,highlight its gravity and severity as it ruins the whole system,describe its various kinds and levels.

Kinds of Corruption:
a-moral corruption
b-financial corruption

Levels of corruption:
a-heirarchical level: In terms of authority; (from top to bottom----u can say from President to peon)
b-in terms of volume(from trillions of dollars to petty corruption)

Causes:
a-Authority
b-Poverty
c-Ambition
d-Globalization of expectations
e-lack of effective accounability mechanism
f-unequal distribution of resources/opportunities


The fifth point in the ''causes'' portion of your essay is very weak.No religion allows corruption of any kind.So it is not restricted to Islam.

With regards,
ASAD

@Imama and @Asad ullah
 

Assalam o Allaikoum wrwb,,,
thnx alot for giving time to my effort..

@imama
I have elaborated these things e.g ECONOMIC SERVEY OF PAKISTAN & recent TRANSPARENCY INTERNATIONAL REPORTS in essay.
and the points added by you is some how related to those one's which r under CAUSES heading.

@Asad ullah
thnx for adding kinds and levels of Corruption. as you have added some points in the CAUSES heading. I want to say that ur some points are same as of mine like
ur heading 'a' is same as '3' of mine
b is same as '1' of mine
and 'e' is same as '6' of mine.
now i want to ask should i add those points separately which are suggested by you...
Looking forward for response.
Thanks again for concentration.
Regards

[QUOTE=Nayab123;162912]Assalam o Allaikoum wrwb,,,
all moderators, award receivers and seniors kindly comment on this outline. Looking forward for healthy discussion.

[B]CORRUPTION______ IT'S CAUSES AND CONSEQUENCES/IMPACTS[/B]

• [B]Introduction[/B]
• [COLOR="green"]Affects [/COLOR]of Corruption on People's lives = Effects
• Causes of Corruption[/B]
1. Low and Irregular Salaries
2. [COLOR="green"]Availability of multiple opportunities for personal enrichment
[/COLOR] = Availability of multiple [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]unfair/undue[/COLOR] opportunities for personal enrichment

3. Access to and control over means of Corruption
4. Limited [COLOR="green"]risks [/COLOR]of exposure and punishment = Limited [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]fear / threat[/COLOR] of exposure and punishment

5. Weakness in Religious belief (in case of Islamic society)
6. [COLOR="green"]Un-practicing[/COLOR] of Anti-Corruption laws = [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Non-practicing
[/COLOR]
• [B]Impacts/Consequences of Corruption

• Social Impacts[/B]
1. Increase in Organized Crime
2. Violation of human rights
3. Devastating impact on environment
4. Corruptions perpetuates poverty
5. [COLOR="green"]Bring [/COLOR]bad image for country = [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Brings[/COLOR]

• [B]Economical Impacts[/B]
1. Delays/Disturbs growth and Development
2. Decrease in private Sector Development
3. Discourage Foreign Direct Investment (FDI)
4. Undermines flow of Aid & Development assistance

• [B]Religious Impacts (in case of Islamic society)[/B]
1. [COLOR="green"]Doing against Islamic Teachings
[/COLOR]= [COLOR="Blue"]Insert terms like : Immoral, un-ethical, greediness, greediness, extravagance, contagion effect in society, etc.[/COLOR]
• [B]Measures to overcome Corruption[/B]
1. Strictly enforcement of Anti-Corruption Laws
2. Giving relief to low paid officials
3. Bringing [COLOR="green"]uncorrupt[/COLOR] leaders & executives to government = [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Non-corrupt/honest/upright[/COLOR]
4. Creating sense to recognize corruption as (unIslamic) immoral evil
5. Giving punishment on exposure of Corruption

• [B]Conclusion[/B][/QUOTE]




Red refers to problem area and blue refers to correction.

Sher e Khuda has rightly guided you in great detail. He has added best points in your essay.

@Nayab123,
Whatever i ve written in my outline is not at all exaustive nor u need to follow all the points in the same sequence.Your outline was not bad but i tried to show u another style or the way to proceed with the essay.If u find some points of any worth or value then u can adjust those points into your own outline.

@Sameen
would u please let me know the meaning of your name?then u see how creative i m.Anyways,ur creativity is admittedly appreciable.

With regards
ASAD

@sameen @Asad ullah
 

Assalam o Allaikoum wrwb,,,
really thnx sameen for ur great concern. You have pointed out very important mistakes of mine.I got clarity form ur respose.

@AsadUllah
definitely i will adjust ur points in my outline.thnx again.

Shaer e Khuda (used by sameen) meri nazroun se guzra tha kuch din pehle, jo k mjhe b unique laga tha :laugh:
i will post some other outlines also, n will wait for both of u to concern along with all other members.

wese kissi oor CSP ya moderator ne koi comment nahi kia iss outline pe:sad

May Allah Bless U all
Regards