1) Energy Crisis
2) Terrorism
3) Problems in Higher Education

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Good initiative Aariz

Terrorism

Terrorism is the major threat ,we r facing.It has effected our lives incredibly in social, political, economic spheres.Its psycological effects have made many of us psychotic and are the main causes of hypertention.How ever endeavours r being made for toppling this menace.World leaders are coordinating and contemplating to resolve this issue.They are also striving to bring hardliners on table for talk.But unfortunately UN's( frequently dubbed as "toothless or paper tiger") inability to resolve the major world problems such as Kashmir and Palestine ,due to some vested intersts of warmongering states in the wake of mushrooming growth of terrorists has really jeopardized the security of the world.
Our govt has also taken some worthconsidering steps to uproot this evil from our society.But all the states must unite together to address the grievances of the disenchanted strata of society and when all the means are utilised and other world issues are resolved then force should b used against those who are the real terrorists and enemies of mankind.

Comments wil b appreciated.
Regards

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Good job dr.atifrana. Here is mine.

Conclusion

Terrorism has emerged as the most ominous threat to the global peace and security. Transcending of the geographical boundaries, this menace has directly and indirectly affected most of the countries with varying degrees of terror, havoc, destabilization and devastation. Pakistan is the major victim and worst hit owing to its contiguity with the epicenter of terrorism i.e. Afghanistan. Besides, our internal vulnerability, competing interest, intrigues and nefarious designs of external players in the region have profoundly compounded the milieu. We have, therefore, no option but to thwart the heinous design of the external and internal enemies by facing this challenge squarely.

regards,
floydian

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@dr.atif rana & floydian
thnk u so much for ur worthy contribution.please give for the Energy Crisis also.
Regards

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Reality alone makes the life STABLE but STAGANANT..
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And for how long are we still going to hate ourselves for the only reason that nobody loves us!!!

Conclusion(this is which i wrote in my essay)

It has been evident that deficit proclaims Pakistan to think over the engulfed dilemma which is harnessing some more tribulations in industrial, educational, health, economic and the dynamic sectors ultimately affecting the larger interests of the country. The disturbance so caused has originated power outages time and again being stumbling block in every facet of life. Even the proposals instituted by the government didn’t contribute some health to the deficient energy sector. The famine will keep on inflating, if it didn’t get any prolific policy at the very accomplishment level rather making it so called public on Media circle. The liability not only rests upon electives but on society as well, to shield the diminishing asset of energy volume by saving it in consumption, this is the only way to move ahead.

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"You Must do the thing you think you can not do" (Eleanor Roosevelt)

"The worst bankrupt in the World is the person who has lost his enthusiasm" (H.W. Arnold)

@ Dr. Rana
Good attempt.
@ All contributors. I am missing philosophical approach in the posted conclusions. I hope we may write better one conclusions.

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@ rishzzz

lovely

@ aariz

The conclusion in essay needs to be precise and to the point. It’s the end note which leaves the lasting impression on the reader. It must be written in abstract form. Remember that you are being judged on your ability to use the language properly. When candidates try to be philosophical they tend to deviate and lose cohesion. In other words when candidates try to show artificial efficiency to impress the examiner they get caught and penalized. The only thing which can impress the examiner is the natural flow of expression, unity and discipline of grammar. So, stick to the basics.

Regards,
floydian

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@flo

I agree with your points up to some extent. By giving philosophical touch in the conclusion, does not mean to deviate from the topic. It means to end the essay in a broad view with simple wordings, not using bombastic words which often confuse the examiners and the candidates fell prey of penalizing.

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I wasn't born to follow and I'm not sure if I was born to lead, but what I'm certain is that I was born to fight my way through life and win

First impression is the last impression and the last impression is the ever lasting impression. So introduction and conclusion both carry immense importance. For impressive conclusion, body of the essay needs to be well thought, well organized with sane linkages.

well, I think it would be better first to sketch out your outline then write conclusion. without outline it can not be judged how one's conclusion is balanced and well summarized.

without head and body, one can't recognize tail.

better either to write introduction or conclusion with outline.

regards

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