Please comment on my essay outline "Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?"

[anwarsadat1980]

CAN WOMEN BE EQUAL TO MEN IN PAKISTAN?

Introduction: (Started with an aya from Sura Nisa)

Conditions of gender inequality in Pakistan
Social
Political
Economic
Educational
Legal
Demographic
Causes of women backwardness in Pakistan
Feudalistic Society
Man domination
Economic Dependence
Misinterpretation of religion
Physical superiority of men
Educational factors

Impacts of women backwardness

Social Disorder
Overpopulation

Steps taken by the government of Pakistan to ensure gender equality

Hadood Ordinance (Zia)
Ministry of Women Development PPP Govt:
Women prisoners set free by PPP
Women Police Stations
Women Protection Bill (Musharraf Govt)
Tawana Pakistan Programme
Benazir Income Support Programme
Prevention of Domestic Violance Bill 2009

Recommendations to ensure gender equality in Pakistan

Conclusion

[tadap]

Dear Sadat You have attempted well but for me the word can means what are the parameters on which women can be equal or not equal in our country.I would have attempted as, yes women can be equal because of their abilities, skills and presence in all sectors of life.You should have focused the potential and latent talent of the women.consequently,elaborating the present state and future suggestion.