Plz check my outline : Can women be equal to men in Pakistan

[csscandidate]

Topic: Can women be equal to men in Pakistan
-->Introduction:
1. Status of Women in Pakistan
2. Why women ought to be equal to men?
a) For economic prosperity
b) Women can nurture a better nation
c) Islam gives equal status to women with men
3. Women can be equal to men by adopting following measures
a) Women education
b) Safe working condition to encourage women participation
c) Giving her fundamental rights
d) Giving her status as given by Islam
4. Steps taken by government to equalize and empower women
a) Quota in jobs
b) Seats reserved for women in assemblies
c) Women protection bill 2006, harassment bill and Domestic violence bills 2009
5. Role of NGOs in women empowerment
6. Role of Media
-->Conclusion

[cavour]

Originally Posted by csscandidate

Topic: Can women be equal to men in Pakistan
-->Introduction:
1. Status of Women in Pakistan
2. Why women ought to be equal to men?
a) For economic prosperity
b) Women can nurture a better nation
c) Islam gives equal status to women with men
3. Women can be equal to men by adopting following measures
a) Women education
b) Safe working condition to encourage women participation
c) Giving her fundamental rights
d) Giving her status as given by Islam
4. Steps taken by government to equalize and empower women
a) Quota in jobs
b) Seats reserved for women in assemblies
c) Women protection bill 2006, harassment bill and Domestic violence bills 2009
5. Role of NGOs in women empowerment
6. Role of Media
-->Conclusion

@CSSCANDIDATE....as per my perception.....your essay outline is perfect....if you have answered in your introduction 'YES WEOMEN CAN BE EQUAL TO MEN IN PAKISTAN'......The rest of outline is excellent.

[KAWISH]

Originally Posted by csscandidate

Topic: Can women be equal to men in Pakistan
-->Introduction:
1. Status of Women in Pakistan
2. Why women ought to be equal to men?
a) For economic prosperity
b) Women can nurture a better nation
c) Islam gives equal status to women with men
3. Women can be equal to men by adopting following measures
a) Women education
b) Safe working condition to encourage women participation
c) Giving her fundamental rights
d) Giving her status as given by Islam
4. Steps taken by government to equalize and empower women
a) Quota in jobs
b) Seats reserved for women in assemblies
c) Women protection bill 2006, harassment bill and Domestic violence bills 2009
5. Role of NGOs in women empowerment
6. Role of Media
-->Conclusion

aoa good effort,not perfect though...
do mention in the outline whether woman can or cannot be equal to man.if yes what are the oppurtunities for them(can support with instances from Pakistan's history)
if not then what are the hurdles,you did discuss them but in an indirect way.
lastly suggestions are not sufficiant,do give more...
best regard

[javed_iqbal7863]

Appreciable outline, but, you should mention the situation of women from villages. most of Pakistani population is in villages. the condition of the women from villages is very poor. you must give arguments to improve the situation of those women.

[csscandidate]

Thanks for your comments.
The comments that you have given,some of these i had included in my essay.
I supported the view that women can be equal to men in pakistan.
I discussed the plight of women in Pakistan especialy in villages and tribal areas,their problems and threats faced by them like honour killing,domestic violence and problem of lack of education.
I mentioned examples from history of Islam and pakistan to remove the notion that women are inferior to men,i also gave examples of some of the brilliant ladies of Islam and Pakistan.
In my suggestions i quoted Quaid-i-Azam and examples of developed countries in the west,some verses and sayings of holy Prophet.
As far as giving more suggestions are concerned,these were that i could think of at that time.
My essay consisted of 18 pages including 2 pages of outline each page with estimately 150 words.
Now plz tell me how much marks you would give me in this essay.
Thanks

[javed_iqbal7863]

I did guess from your mentioned situation that your essay was written in proper way. It fulfills the requirements of the essay. Insha Allah, you will obtain more than 55 marks in your essay. Allah bless you(Ameen)