Plz check : Essay on women rights
 

Plz check my essay on Women Rights and give me sugessions for improvement
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OutLine
Place of a woman in society
Introduction to women Rights
Social Rights of women
Economical Rights of women
Legal Rights in women
women rights in Past
women rights in Present age
women rights in west
women rights in our society
conclusion
women rights in Islam[/COLOR]
woman is a motherm a daughterm a sister and wife.woman is beauty of the universe.woman is symbol of sincerity,love and life.It is quite true that great men have great mothers.According to Nepoleon
Give me good mothers and i will give you good nation.
women play vital role in human progress have a significiant place in the society .they are not at all inferior to men.They are capable of sharing all the resposibilities of life.Man and women have rightly compared to the wheelsof the same carriage.As a mother her position is uniqueshe brings up the children with care.The progrees of the nation depends wpon the way the mother bring up their children.
It is true that the role of the women in society is very strong but it is also true that inspite of women s vital rolem society has not given her proper status.For achieving proper statusin the society, women has worked hard.

dear, you should empahasize on the grammatical errors;correct use of articles,words etc

[QUOTE=Abdul Rehman 786;191121]Plz check my essay on Women Rights and give me sugessions for improvement
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OutLine
Place of a woman in society
Introduction to women Rights
Social Rights of women
Economical Rights of women
Legal Rights in women
women rights in Past
women rights in Present age
women rights in west
women rights in our society
conclusion
women rights in Islam[/COLOR]
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aoa its a good outline though not comprehensive.Discuss the problems faced by women,problems in the enforcement of their rights,and also give suggestions.
good luck

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Give me good mothers and i will give you good nation.
women play vital role in human progress [COLOR=Blue]and [/COLOR]have a significiant place in the society .they are not at all inferior to men.They are capable of sharing all the resposibilities of life.[COLOR=Blue]men[/COLOR] and women [SIZE=3]have[/SIZE][COLOR=Blue]are[/COLOR] rightly compared to the wheels of the same carriage.As a mother her position is uniqueshe brings up the children with care.The progrees of the nation depends wpon the way the mother bring up their children.
It is true that the role of the women in society is very strong but it is also true that inspite of women s vital rolem society has not given her proper status.For achieving proper statusin the society, women has worked hard.[/QUOTE]
i ve tried to highlight few grammaticle mistakes.
good luck