Dear, Qualifiers, Seniors, Juniors, every one is requested to kindly analyse my essyay and guide me accordingly.

POVERTY ALLEVIATION1.

Introduction
a) What is Poverty
b) Why country and people are poor

2. Factors Responsible for Povertya)
a) Bad Governance
b) Corruption
c) Unemployment
d) Inflation
e) Power Crisis
f) Lawlessness
g) Terrorism
h) Population Explosion
i) Debt Burden
j) Declined Foreign Investment

3. Effects of Povertya)

a) Failed State
b) Poor Living Standard
c) 34 out of 179 on the Transparency list
d) Most Dangerous country on the earth
e) Social Restlessness
f) Daily suicides due to financial constraints
g) Children on Sale
h) Loot and Plunder
i) Increase in Social evils
j) Economic Downfall
k) Political disharmony
l) Sectarian and ethnical violence
m) Lowest mortality rate
n) Weakened Educational system.

4. Alleviating Poverty

a) Installing Good Governance
b) Curbing Corruption
c) Efficient use of Resources
d) Resolving Energy Crisis
e) Providing Law and Order
f) Creating Employment Opportunities
g) Installing Industries in every city
h) Focusing Education
i) Root out Terrorism
j) Reducing Debt Burden
k) Micro Loans for Rural Areas
l) Loans for Agriculture
m) Loans for youth Business ventures


Introduction:
Poverty is a state in which people are unable to satisfy their basic needs of food, shelter, security, and clothing; in this scenario People with their family are unable to educate their children, cannot get proper medication, unable to protect themselves from anti social people and are destitute to handle the natural calamities and hardships.

Poverty of people is directly proportional with the rise and fall of the nation, In other words, people are poorer because their country is poor. Since independence Pakistan is under the acute state of poverty vicious circle due to constant state of Bad Governance, Corruption, unemployment, Inflation, Power Crisis, Lawlessness, Terrorism, Population explosion, Debt burden, and absence of foreign Investment.



Conclusion:

Alleviation of Poverty is possible by addressing the root causes of the poverty, to handle effectively the state of corruption, providing security to people to let them become comfortable to freely invest their ventures, creating opportunities of employment, by installation of small and large units of Industries in both village and towns, Investing in Education to drive the knowledge based Economy, rooting out the Terrorism to attract the foreign investment portfolio, Putting economy on right track to handle the trade deficit and debt burden.

Is there no one to check my essay and suggest?

You have written a good essay. Good effort.

Is there no one to check my essay and suggest?

DPO sb,

Introduction should always be eye-catching and impressive.It should conatin meaningful sentences which directly hit the given topic. No stray sentence is to be penetrated into ur first paragraph.
-Always use short sentences in ur discourse.
-Pay attention to the correct use of punctuation and articles.
-The grammatical errors are punished.
(you have used long sentences and hav committed punctuation errors in your every first Paragraph)


Regards

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Irfan Ali Samo
Police Service of Pakistan

I have a question:

Do these essays have to be in point form?

I've done A Level English General and English Literature essays and we were never required to make headings with black pens and divide our essays with points 1,2,3 and so on.

Is it required for the CSS essay paper? I mean, we read essays in newspapers and magazines (Time, Newsweek, The Economist) and they don't subdivide their essays so mathematically either.

Can anyone guide us here?

Thanks!

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He conquers who endures.

Not really. You can just make an outline on the last page through brainstorming which helps you in collecting and arranging the ideas.

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...and I am the dark of this our new day

@ Ahmed
The Standard books of english essay suggest not to use headings and sub-headings. I cant understand how the candidates use them in to their essays and finally menage to qualify the paper.However, I wud personally advise you to go according to the rules of essay. I did never use headings in my essay and got 62 marks.

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Irfan Ali Samo
Police Service of Pakistan

Start your essay with any quotation or with any unique sentence which attracts examiner's attention. And in the last line of first paragraph u have to write your opinion related to topic. On this opinion u will then write your whole essay. And also use short sentences...

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Main tu aik Baab hn Tareekh mein Likha jaon ga

salam to all.
m not an expert but i have something to tellu that ur introduction is better than conclusion
secondly u can also add crushing policies of IMF n WB
Flood cost
productive role of women
result oriented use of zakat n usher
All the best to all n me too