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Introduction: The problem of unemployment has all along been existed in Pakistan since its inception. It has occupied a centre in the country therefore, Pakistan's new generations suffers from this problem a lot.
Causes behind the unemployment of youth.
1-there are no vacancies for youth in the market, it is already saturated.
2- Population explosion.
3-Education system is backward so that youth are not fully prepared to come to the market demands.
4-Fiscal deficit in budget has detracted the ratio of the unemployment.
5- Lack of industrialization.
6- Favoritism in politics.
7- Copy culture.
8- Interruption of political parties in educational institutions.
9- Weak economic plan and management.
Effects of unemployment on youths of Pakistan.
a-The youths are inclined to various social evils and diseases and even certain commit suicide.
b- Pressure groups take place in the country.
c- Ratio of criminality is on the increase among the youth.
d- Street killing, kidnapping, robbery, raise its head in the community.
e- Youth fall a pray to undesirable activities like smuggling, sale of heroin etc.
f- Social disorder is on the increase in the society.
g- Loss of national talent on which hope of family and future of Pakistan depends mainly.
Suggestive measures:
1-Educational system should be strong. We should seek the light from the model of Sir Syed Ahmed Khan.
2-Copy culture should be brought to an end and merit based culture should be developed.
3-Industrial sector should be encouraged.
4-Politiacal parties should be excommunicated from the educational institutions.
Conclusion: Unemployment is an alarming tone for the survival of the country. Solution to this problem is a must to wriggle the new generation out of the sense of deprivation.
The problem of unemployment has all along been existing in Pakistan society since its birth. It has occupied a central place in the country. Therefore, its new generation suffers from this problem a lot. It has made youths weak mentally and psychologically. It has brought about a great mental disorder and unrest among the country youths. This has made their lives worsen and national talent useless. The unemployed young men go too frequently far the limits to earn their livelihood. They fall a prey to criminality. For certain wealth, they can kidnap and commit murder of an innocent one. Moreover, there is a sever type of competition in the open market. Those who are well competent and active enough stand a great chance of selection. However, clever and broad minded youth are very few and far between. The market is already full and there is hardly any need for more workers. Besides, educational system is not up to the standard than expected ever. The youth of the hour is not well prepared in the educational institutions as well as the country market demands. This is the reason that the problem of unemployment is still unaddressed and new generation is under its debris. Therefore, educational institutions must be strengthened and made better than ever before. This being so, copy culture must be abolished from the institutions. Later on the youths will be better prepared to serve the country whole hog.
To begin with, due to rapid population growth, all the professions are already saturated so that there is no any need of further employees. On the other hand, education of the country is not up to the required standards. It is backward and deficit so that the youths are not trained full well to come to the market demands. A graduate young is hardly accepted in any field. He is artless to the great extent and having no ability to work or serve in any profession at the present in the country. The on going educational system is divided in such a way that it creates classes between the people in accordance with the college and university they attend, on the other hand majority of the colleges and universities are infested with political parties. All of that creates confusion, rifts and tumbles between the students. The members of political parties are often found in undesirable, criminal activities in educational institutions. The real purpose of education remains unaddressed. Therefore, after getting degrees, they lag behind; only degrees are in their hand but not any ability. They depend on the degree focused education. This is the reason they remain unemployed.
Given the facts above, copy culture specially practiced in Sindh and Balochistan has reduced education to an empty show and of no account.
Further more, fiscal deficit in budget has detracted the ratio of employment and has made educational system weak or emaciated. The educational system is in shambles and hardly any budget is provided to reform system. The budget of this year has promised no better for Pakistani people. It has rather made them worried, only ten percent is given to amend education while fifty percent to defense. What a foolish practice it is! The root of the country problem is lack of education leading to lack of opportunities for employment which in turn gives rise to criminal and terrorist activities among the youth of the nation.
Besides it, the percentage of employment varies according to industrial development of the country. Pakistan, however, is a backward country in industrial sphere. Government has not given any priority to promote industrialization in the country, lack of industrialization deprives the youths from employment.
Last but not the least, favoritism in politics and lack of plan and management has also given birth to a puzzling condition in this regard. The favoritism in politics has created environment of self- aggrandizement so that every one is shackled with his own interests to a great extent. Every body chooses or supports and seconds the party members of its own for certain posts. That is why a poor even talented candidate faces joblessness. Moreover, lack of planned management for the future has been paving the way for the economic scrambles in the country so that the problem of employment is still unresolved satisfactorily.
In this way, the first and foremost negative effect of unemployment is that it creates frustration among the youths. Lack of employment put a wide spread effect on them and various social evils and diseases take place among them. In the sequel, they pose a great threat to law and order of the nation so far. Even certain commit suicide in various cases it has been witnessed, while others fall in the lapse of criminality and hooliganism. Sinful and undesirable activities are, therefore, on the rise in the society. This not only mars the rhythm of national progress but also puts the coming future of nation on insecurity. In short, a country can not make head way whose new generation is unemployed, impoverished, backward and benighted. Therefore, the vistas of progress have got blurred and confused.
Similarly, in the countries where talent is used in an apt way, they have established their supremacy in the comity of nations. The case of Japan is to learn from, which is known as Scientific and Economic Giant. However, unfortunately that new talent in Pakistan is made useless. Lack of opportunities has made the lives of the youths insipid and rather humdrum. Thus, national talent is of no use on which hope of the family and the future of the Pakistan rest on.
In this wise, education is key to change and progress, both change and progress go hand in hand, no change no progress. Therefore, educational system should be stabilized and changed to prepare the youths according to the true values of life and especially the market demands. The liberal education in Pakistan should be provided to majority but not to the minority at door steps. We should seek the light from the model of SIR SYED AHMED KHAN. System should be reoriented to suit the needs of the developing country by making the standard courses. All the youth belonging to elites or non elites ought to be prepared in government colleges and universities that will lead the system to reform.
Besides, copy culture ought to be put an end to by promoting merit culture in the country as possible. When copy culture is uprooted the true education would be supplied from topmost corner to the bottommost corner of the country. This being so, political parities should be excommunicated from the colleges and universities by creating peaceful environment for the students.
Moreover, industrialization should be developed in the country that would lead to employment opportunities for the youth by contributing stability to the country. Pakistan is a poor country in regard of industrialization, therefore, there should be given top priority and upper hand to the boost of the industrialization.
Finally, Quid e Azam Mohammad Ali jinnah, the father of the nation, called the youth and the students as the arsenal of muslim India. Hence, available youth's activities and energies should be directed in a useful channel for the nation's prosperity. Unemployment is an alarming tone for the survival of the country, solution to this problem is a must to wriggle the new generation out of the sense of deprivation.
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Well your grammer and vocabulary seems to be pretty good, some sentences however, were scattered around. Something you should have said before you said later for example the about the country's population. I just rewrote your sentences, some of them and put them together so you should seperate them like they were in your original essay.
-Your going off-topic with the education issue about the political parties, you should give some points on how to make the education better than then relate them to your original idea of unemployment. Most importantly you have to stay on topic.

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The problem of unemployment has long been existing in the Pakistan society since its birth in 1947. For 63 years this issue has occupied a central place in the country. Due to government negligence on the issue and the continued growth of population, the current generation sufference from this issue immensely. Unemployment has brought about a great mental disorder and unrest leaving the youth of the country weak; emotionally, psychologically, and to some extent even physically, rendering the national talent useless.
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The unemployed young go far the limites to earn their livlihood and eventually falling prey to malfeasance. Unable to provide for their loved ones, they adopt the life of a criminal. They start out as armed burglers but for the s ecurity of their loved ones they may even take the life of innocents. On the other hand the educational system of the country is deeply flawed and does not meet the standard requirements. The youth of the hour is not well prepared in the educational institutions and subsequently upon graduation does not meet the competitive market standars. The flawed educational institutions are the underlying problems of of unemployment. Therefore, to address this issue properly, we must strengthen our educational system.
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To begin with, due to the rapid population growth, all the professions have already been filled beyond their capacity therefore, that there is no any need of further employees. On the other hand, education of the country is backward and deficit so that the youths are not trained well enough to meet the market demands. A young graduate is hardly accepted in any field. The on going educational system is divided in such a way that it creates classes between people in accordance with the college and university they attend, on the other hand, majority of the colleges and universities are infested with political parties. All of these creates confusion, rifts and tumbles between the students. The members of political parties are often found in undesirable, criminal activities in educational institutions.
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The real purpose of education remains unaddressed. Therefore, after receiving their degrees, the young graduates lag behind with only a piece of paper, a degree, in their hand but not the ability. They depend on the degree focused education, which is the reason they remain unemployed. Given the facts above, copy culture specially practiced in Sindh and Balochistan has reduced education to an empty show and of no account. Furthermore, fiscal deficit in budget has detracted the ratio of employment and has made educational system weak or emaciated.
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The educational system is in shambles and hardly any budget is provided to reform system. The budget of this year, 2010, has promised no better for the Pakistani people. It has rather made them worried since only ten percent is given to amend education while fifty percent to defense. What a foolish practice it is! The root of the country's problem is lack of education leading to lack of opportunities for employment which in turn is giving rise to criminal and terrorist activities among the youth of the nation.
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The percentage of employment varies according to industrial development of the country. Pakistan, however, is a backward country in the industrial sphere. Government has not given any priority to promote industrialization in the country. This lack of industrialization deprives the youths from employment. Last but not the least, favoritism in politics and lack of plan and management has also given birth to a puzzling condition in this regard. The favoritism in politics has created environment of self- aggrandizement so that every one is shackled with his own interests to a great extent. Every body chooses or supports and seconds the party members of its own for certain posts. That is why a poor even talented candidate faces joblessness.
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