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kindly comment on my outlines
1.introduction of work and worshiop
2.importance of work in Quran
3.importance of work in Hadith
4.work is worship
5.comments of scholars on work
6.achievements made by the man through work
7.work is necessary for success
8.conclusion
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its good though you have created good outline, but one thing, if you have definded work and worship at an introduction, what will be the sub points you will define in point number four you have mentioned 4. work and worship,?
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thnx for comment sir.nw i have made some altration in it.as that was my 1st atmpt.i m sure 2nd atmpt wil b bettr

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1.itroduction
2.work is not a curse
3.work banish three great evils bordem,vice and poverty
4.constructive work provies joy
5.importance of work mentiond in Quran
6.importance of work mentiond in Hadith
7.work is an act of worship in islam
8.Achievements of work
9.conclusion

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Dear Your outline is short.You may add quotes as well;
--"Every noble work is at first impossible"
Thomas Carlyle
--Prophets' examples,specially Holy Prophet's(P.B.U.H)
--Examples of countries specially China and Japan

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you can also add the example of Quaid e azam his untiring efforts and works for the acheivement of Pakistans...also his quotes regardind hard work...
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Really nice effort hijaab , seems good. however point 2. work is not curse is looks awkward at this position, it may be better at after hadith (after point 6) or may other litrative (positive) points then add this point, beacuse it is like commanding paragraph, and commanding para should alwayes be after the examples
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kindly comment on my outlines
1.introduction of work and worshiop
2.importance of work in Quran
3.importance of work in Hadith
4.work is worship
5.comments of scholars on work
6.achievements made by the man through work
7.work is necessary for success
8.conclusion
dis outline is not sufficinet ...u hv to ad more things in it...like

-historical background of word
-religion n work
diff religion n sects
mulla's role
work in islam etc
- work is worship

personal satisfaction
development
prosperity
need of the time
state's responisbilty
etc
- work is worship --then y pak is undeveloped??
impact on pak economy
pak culture
one person earns n rest ov family members do nothing except to rest
- govt steps to encourage
role of media
international scenario
n lots ov points u have to discuss....!!
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thnx sir.i wil be on ur advice

realy good comments.may u help me about mterial according 2 ur headings
thnx sir

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realy good comments.may u help me about mterial according 2 ur headings
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hmmm....material b main doon :P....thori search karo mil jaye gaa...agar na milay tou...................kher max points outline main likho ....u appearing in css 2011?? ur outline shud not be less than 3 pages ....wesay madam aap ko kis ne kaha yeh tp prepare karnay ko??? i think u shud prepare WOMEN ...women is the hot favourite topic of the paper setter ...!!
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