Please tell me can i pass? Rate my essay please
 

I wrote on woman in pak an angel or source of all evils. Outlnes. Woman-a gender. 2.background. 2a. Woman in pre-islamic era worldwide. 2b woman in post islbmic era worldwide. 3.woman journey frm independence to present in pak. 4.her services to state. 5.her strugle. 6. An angel or an evil. 7.conclusion. But i only wrote 9 pages. Wrote two ayats n three quotat4ons. How mu2h chances pl i request tel me

[QUOTE=Dua bhurgri;271552]I wrote on woman in pak an angel or source of all evils. Outlnes. Woman-a gender. 2.background. 2a. Woman in pre-islamic era worldwide. 2b woman in post islbmic era worldwide. 3.woman journey frm independence to present in pak. 4.her services to state. 5.her strugle. 6. An angel or an evil. 7.conclusion. But i only wrote 9 pages. Wrote two ayats n three quotat4ons. How mu2h chances pl i request tel me[/QUOTE]
I am sorry but your outline does not match with the asked statement. I am affraid I cann't see you scoring well in the essay. I have attempted the same essay and my outline was!

Introduction:
Present state of woman in Pakistan
State of woman in the world

Division in the society of Pakistan regarding status of woman
One segment treats her as an angel
a) She is regarded as equal to man
b) Her well defined role in the family
c) She enjoys all walks of life
The segment of the society treats her as the source of all evils
a) She is regarded as economic liability
b) She is considered as source of all domectic porblems
c) Few more points

Factors contributing to this divide and treatement towards woman
a) Culture of Pakistan and evil customs
b) Illiteracy
c) Poverty

Pragmatic Solutions to promote woman as an angel and not evil
a) Change in Social attitute
b) Education
c) Elimination of poverty
d) Role of institutions
e) Islamic teachings

Conclusion.


Others are welcome to comment on my outline.
I wish all the best to all of you.

yeah sure why not... you just need to work a bit hard... n ur outline is not bad.. i dont know how much pages ur essay containing

Thanx 4 reply n ur honest coments. Plz need more rpls to conclude my results and my pages are nine.

[QUOTE=Dua bhurgri;271588]Thanx 4 reply n ur honest coments. Plz need more rpls to conclude my results and my pages are nine.[/QUOTE]

Forget about the papers which have been conducted. Focus on your remaining papers.

You need not worry about the papers till your final paper. Do assess your marks as soon as you are done with all the papers.

yar hr koi different baat btae ga apko. Raz has rightly said that you must concentrate on your next papers. CSS main aik kaam zrur kiya kro k jo paper de ao usk baray main discuss na kro aur aik dafa uska chapter close kr k aglay papers per dehaan do.Jittna discuss kro gay utni tension brhay gi aur iss se aglay papers bhi khrab hotay hain. Is liye ab is thread per bhi focus na kro.And good luck.

[QUOTE=mussaa;271609]yar hr koi different baat btae ga apko. Raz has rightly said that you must concentrate on your next papers. CSS main aik kaam zrur kiya kro k jo paper de ao usk baray main discuss na kro aur aik dafa uska chapter close kr k aglay papers per dehaan do.Jittna discuss kro gay utni tension brhay gi aur iss se aglay papers bhi khrab hotay hain. Is liye ab is thread per bhi focus na kro.And good luck.[/QUOTE]

Haan, sahi kaha aap ne :D. Paper pass honga yaa nahin yeh to checker ke haath main hai, koi aur kiya bata sakta hai :D

[QUOTE=Dua bhurgri;271552]I wrote on woman in pak an angel or source of all evils. Outlnes. Woman-a gender. 2.background. 2a. Woman in pre-islamic era worldwide. 2b woman in post islbmic era worldwide. 3.woman journey frm independence to present in pak. 4.her services to state. 5.her strugle. 6. An angel or an evil. 7.conclusion. But i only wrote 9 pages. Wrote two ayats n three quotat4ons. How mu2h chances pl i request tel me[/QUOTE]

BTW maine bhi yeh angel aur source of evil waala attempt kiya, aur maine introduction main Iblees kee misaal dee ke jaise woh pehle angel tha aur aik nafarmani kee waja se source of evil ban gaya, usi tarah hamari haan bhi woman pehle ghar main angel hoti hai, magar aik baar zara se inkar kee der hai aur phir source of evil ban jaati hai :D

[QUOTE=mussaa;271609]yar hr koi different baat btae ga apko. Raz has rightly said that you must concentrate on your next papers. CSS main aik kaam zrur kiya kro k jo paper de ao usk baray main discuss na kro aur aik dafa uska chapter close kr k aglay papers per dehaan do.Jittna discuss kro gay utni tension brhay gi aur iss se aglay papers bhi khrab hotay hain. Is liye ab is thread per bhi focus na kro.And good luck.[/QUOTE]

Assalamulaikum,\
I am second to the words of mussa, don't even discuss it now. just concentrate on the upcoming papers.
Regards

Exactly! Thanx alot guys' u al really pushed me to get out of a mess... Wel mz precis n composition paper went excellent. Plz atlease once say a pray 4me tat i clear this year...its my desperate need. ALLAH bless al of us with success! Thanx alot 4 to help me in ryt tym.

Dear Bhurgi, fellas have very rightly advised you. Now just concentrate on upcoming papers.. God be with you, amin.