Does Pakistan society regard woman as the angel in the house or source of all evils?
 

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This title itself is flawed and can never come. Its like saying that dogs can fly. Even in the most primitive and traditional societies women are not treated as source of all evils. Even in the tribes where practices like Karo Kari and Vani etc are practiced and even in the pre-Islam arab society women is/was never treated as source of all evils.

Do remember that source of all evils is different then looking down upon or degrading. Source of all evils imply one must immediately kill the subject and its associates and ensure there is no subject left in the area/region/world.

P.S. I just realized I used alot of 'even in'. Need to work on my expression :(

Yes Pakistani society regard women as angel in the house, but as the society perceives angels are "innocent" and "imprudent", they keep them well guarded and protected in the house. Angels dont have any right to not comply with any commandment, or they will be treated like "Iblis" who did not comply with just one commandment and was stripped of the title of "Angel" and became "source of evil" :D.

Thats how I attempted, does it sound good :D??

Does Pakistan society regard woman as the angel in the house or source of all evils?
 

[B]Introduction
Arab regard of woman before Islam
Islam gave rights
Pakistan-A muslim country
Woman is pakistani society
Woman as an angel
woman as source of all evils due to misconceptions
conclusion[/B]
I have attempt this essay according to the above outline.
Please,share your ideas about my essay.

i attempted it in the same way... :) 2586 words...:))

i'll share my outlines also but after my exams...:tata

Does pakistani society consider women as an angel..........check my outlines plz
 

Outlines
1. Introduction
2. Status of women in Pakistani society
(Women in rural society+ women in urban society)
3. Islamic perspective about the status of women in society
status of women as being a mother
Status of women as being a daughter
Status of women as being a sister
Status of women as being a wife
4. Cause of discrimination against women in society
Traditional society
Misinterpretation of religious education
Deteriorating law and order situation
Lack of interest of civil society, media as well as of govt
5. Remedies
Financial security to women
Education and awareness
Implementation of true religious doctrine regarding the status of women
Due role of media, civil society, Judiciary as well as of Government
6 conclusions
"You can tell the condition of a nation by looking at the status of
Women in its society" (Jawahar Lal Nehru)



Seniors
Plz suggest me
did i handled the paper in right direction
However, i could write hardly around 1800 words

[QUOTE=zain786;275050]Outlines
1. Introduction
2. Status of women in Pakistani society
(Women in rural society+ women in urban society)
3. Islamic perspective about the status of women in society
status of women as being a mother
Status of women as being a daughter
Status of women as being a sister
Status of women as being a wife
4. Cause of discrimination against women in society
Traditional society
Misinterpretation of religious education
Deteriorating law and order situation
Lack of interest of civil society, media as well as of govt
5. Remedies
Financial security to women
Education and awareness
Implementation of true religious doctrine regarding the status of women
Due role of media, civil society, Judiciary as well as of Government
6 conclusions
"You can tell the condition of a nation by looking at the status of
Women in its society" (Jawahar Lal Nehru)



Seniors
Plz suggest me
did i handled the paper in right direction
However, i could write hardly around 1800 words[/QUOTE]


No, in my opinion, you picked up the heading from already existing outlines by academies. which of the heading do you think directly addresses the Essay phrase or its Aspects?

we dont regard her as an angel in the house nor a source of all evil :O


very bad topic to write on, because you dont know what the examiner had thought in the mind when he made this topic.it was a risky topic, atleast in my opinion. I am not an expert in essay writing but just gave you guys my two cents.

do we regard her as a source of evil? Answer is BIG NO, she is not the problem in our society.

Do we regard her as an angel in the house? No

So what were we supposed to write..

The answer is You were supposed to write that we dont regard her as an angel in the house nor a source of evil in our society.
She is not regarded as an angel, she is suffering, struggling for equal rights in our society as compared to man, whats her situation in our society
in rural areas and urban areas

in urban areas her condition is better than rural, like she is treated as an angel but not all. so now you could write her status in our soceity and then conclude your argumentative that she is not regarded as an angel in the house nor source of evil...

BUT mind you SHE IS NOT A SOURCE OF EVIL IN OUR SOCIETY so those who touched the aspect i wrote will pass this exam and those who just copy pasted academy essays will suffer

Just my analysis.
correction is welcome. Atleast i would have attempted like that if i were given a topic like this.

i forgot to give an outline in the essay paper. has outline been defined any marks ? if one doest give an outline can he pass? seniors pls help me out

A very very very tricky topic indeed and a BAD BAD choice, if one didn't really get what the essay demanded.

I think, first of all, we need to classify the type of essay. whether it's an argumentative one? can we take one stance? or is it descriptive and narrative/analytical? or I don't consider myself any authority on essay-writing by any means, but what I feel is that this topic was analytical and there was need of synthesis out of it!