1) CORRUPTION:
A Its meaning.
B A Social evil.
2 ) CAUSES:
Lack of good governance.
No supervision.
Lack of comittment.
Elected representatives bribes the poor.
Corrupt bureaucrates.
Unwillingness.
No accountability.
Not following QURAN.
Lack of Social, Political and Economic justice.
Unlimited Social needs.
Difficult to meet both ends meet.
Discrimination of caste/cadre.
Economic Pressures.
Swindlers, Tax dodgers and Loan defaulters.
Favouritism.
No proper use of budget.

CORRUPTION; GLOBLE SCENARIO.
National level.
International level.

CORRUPTION AND ITS ILL EFFECTS:
Social
Political.
Economical.

FIGHT AGAINST THE OCTOPUS OF CORRUPTION.
Good governance.
Supervision.
Comittment.
Honest representative.
Hionest bureaucrates.
Willigness.
Proper accountability.
Guidance of QURAN.
Social, political and economical justice.
No discrimination.
No economic pressures.
Proper usage of budget

nice attempt...keep it up..God bless u

no doubt its cool attempt, the only thing i have to say is, don't stretch it to such extent and if possible involve media role too in eradicating corruption. the overall effort was appreciated.

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Brilliant.
Just one suggestion.
Write the scenario paragraphs before causes and after introduction.
Keep it up.

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Following is a critical analysis to point out flaws/lacking in your attempt with an intent of improvements.

I don't know what you mean by this "B A Social evil", looking vague, either you want to include it in introduction or where?

Lack of commitment to what? Again vague, try to be specific and focused.

Elected representatives bribes the poor?

Unwillingness to what? Be specific.

Difficult to meet both ends meet?

Economic Pressures?

No proper use of budget? Is it a cause??

You have completely missed the institutional responses to corruption in Pakistan. Discuss in detail the anti-corruption strategies, agencies and mechanism in Pakistan before independence, after independence, from era to era, and put special emphasis on: The National Anti-Corruption Bureau (NAB). Discuss the ineffectiveness and lacking of anti-corruption strategies, agencies and mechanism in coping the corruption in Pakistan.

Your attempt is not up to mark but the positive point is that you have tried it. Keep trying and practicing.

Best of luck

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good attempt. More suggestions can be written.

It will be better if you write short paragraphs.

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