Status of Women in Islam!
 

outline

[B]1- introduction[/B]
[B]2- women in pre-Islamic era[/B]
a-greeks,
b-egyptians
c-Christians
d-Arabs
[B]3- social status of women[/B]
a-prestigious place in society
b-education
c-trade & buisness
d-service sector
[B]4-diversified place in family fabric[/B]
[B]5- political status[/B]
a-legislature
b-judicial
c-executive
d-military
[B]6- legal status[/B]
a-marriage
b-khula
c-evidence
d-maintenace
[B]7- women emancipation- west and islam[/B]
[B]8-conclusion[/B]

You did one grave mistake. Remember that Islam doesn't allow you to criticize others' religions. Examiners take this quite literally. Also it'd be better to begin by writing about the nature of woman, how woman differs from man, and how Islam acknowledges it and fulfills this unique role. Woman's emancipation is a different topic in itself. If you come to think of it, you will have to write about the industrial revolution, the need for work force, industrialist's wickedness, loss of morality, gender inequality, wage disparity, feminist movements etc etc.. My view is, it will be better not to write about woman's emancipation in this essay.

[QUOTE=chemguy;337867]You did one grave mistake. Remember that Islam doesn't allow you to criticize others' religions. Examiners take this quite literally. Also it'd be better to begin by writing about the nature of woman, how woman differs from man, and how Islam acknowledges it and fulfills this unique role. Woman's emancipation is a different topic in itself. If you come to think of it, you will have to write about the industrial revolution, the need for work force, industrialist's wickedness, loss of morality, gender inequality, wage disparity, feminist movements etc etc.. My view is, it will be better not to write about woman's emancipation in this essay.[/QUOTE]

one of the aspirants wrote this outline in 2010 exam. he wrote the exact same points and he scored 45 markes. ofcourse it needs to be improved.

Not bad!