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Is Corruption eroding our Society?

Introduction
Types of corruption
a.pity level
b.major level
c.Political level
Causes of corruption
a.Display of affluence
b.inflation
c.ignorance.
d.feudalism
e.ineffective process of accountability
f.poor performance of anti corruption agencies
major affected institutions of corruption in pakistan
steps for eradication
a.mass awareness
b.steps to remove inflation
c.effective process of accountability
d.end of feudalism
Conclusion:huh::huh:

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;382014]Is Corruption eroding our Society?

Introduction
Types of corruption
a.pity level
b.major level
c.Political level
Causes of corruption
a.Display of affluence
b.inflation
c.ignorance.
d.feudalism
e.ineffective process of accountability
f.poor performance of anti corruption agencies
major affected institutions of corruption in pakistan
steps for eradication
a.mass awareness
b.steps to remove inflation
c.effective process of accountability
d.end of feudalism
Conclusion:huh::huh:[/QUOTE]


dear this outline is not in consonance with the topic. topic is "is corruption is eroding our society".

so reconsider ur topic and come to the point.

Dear You can include Unemployment, illiteracy and lack of transparent accountability system.
Here is my outline for review and comments.
Definition and background of corruption.
Corruption in Pakistan society (level wise overview)
Ills of corruption in Pakistan society
Unemployment
favouritism
bribes
Compromised political system
Compromised merit system
discrimination
illegal ways of earning (crimes,robbery, theft etc)
Root Causes of Corruption In Pakistan Society:
Illiteracy (covers lack of awareness)
poor check & balance systems
Involvement of top leadership etc (without mentioning names of any individual)
Centralized management system in Pakistan

Remedies:
Education
Special awareness programs
Discouraging favouritism and bribes
Electing the sincere and clean leadership
effective check & Balance system
Evaluation of accountability agencies and correction
etc
Conclusion


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[QUOTE=marilatif;382037]dear this outline is not in consonance with the topic. topic is "is corruption is eroding our society".

so reconsider ur topic and come to the point.[/QUOTE]
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