seniors pls comment on the outline of essay

[faris]

challenges of economic crisis in Pakistan
outline
-introduction
-current economic condition of Pakistan
-Economic challenges for Pakistan
1.Energy crises
.oil,gas,electricity and water scarcity
.exploration setback
2. Dependence on expensive resources
.rental power plants,thermal power plants
3.stumbling industry
.deteriorated condition of textile industry
.lack of modern machinery
.shortage of professionals, skilled labour
4.Trade and business contraction
.trade deficit
.constraints in promotion of exports
5.Under development of agriculture
.use of obsolete equipment and techniques
.poor irrigation methods
.non availability and high prices of pesticides and fertilizers
6.Rampant corruption and dismal performance of public sector enterprises
7.Financial or credit crises
.government borrowings from State bank of Pakistan
.circular debt and non recoveries of privatized institutions
8.Non exploitation of strategic economic direction
.US,China,Gulf,South and East Asia
9.Global financial crunch and its effects on Pakistan
10.Global warming and its severe effects on Pakistan
impacts
1.Business contraction
.decline in national and foreign investment
.Capital flow
2.Inflation
3.production short fall
4.unemployment
5.poverty
6.social unrest
Measures to cope with economic challenges
1.Deal with power crises
.construction of dams
.Exploitation of renewable resources
2.Enhance international trade
.reduction of terrifs
.Improve quality and price unit for export
.market diversification(food processing,IT,agriculture)
.link up with international production chain
3.Improve agriculture
4.Restore Fiscal and monetary balance
.Inflation control
.allivate tax to GDP ratio
.autonomy of State Bank of Pakistan
. implementation of NFC
.tax on agriculture
5.Self-reliance and social solidarity
Conclusion

[usman khalid]

It seems to be a nice detailed outline... You may also briefly mention the economic impact of recent disasters like earthquakes and floods etc and subsequent disaster management.