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please check my eassy outline.
i am a beginner essay writer. so, i thought to sketch out an outline first. please check my outline and also please suggest some valuable points. thanx in advance :-)
Falling standard of education....causes and remedies. Outline: Education quotation. 1- introduction. (1 paragraph of 8 lines) a)history of education (1 paragraph of 8 lines) b)importance of education in west (1 paragraph of 8 lines) c)importance of education in Islam (1 paragraph of 8 lines) 2- education system of Pakistan. a) education before partition. b) current scenario of education in Pakistan. c) different laws for imposing education in Pakistan. 3)-causes of falling standard of education in Pakistan. a) increase in poverty. b) economic impact on education. c) effect of war on terror on education. d) lack of teachers hiring and training. e) induction of private academies. f) unemployment factor. g) lack of research activities. h) poor curriculum implementation. I) lack of practical work. j) lack of higher education. 4)- Remedies. |
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outline analysis
noor ur effort is plausible. But more work is need of the hour. U can add more solid points. But as a bignner it is an encouraging effort. Keep it up
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then write cuases of falling standard. u have written many causes. some of them relevant like, c) effect of war on terror on education. d) lack of teachers hiring and training. whereas others are totally irrelevant. induction of private academies. f) unemployment factor. g) lack of research activities. lack of practical work also write remedies in bullet form so that examiner know what remedies have u suggested. finally if possible write a concluding sentence in outline.
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