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Arrow Chek my outlines plz. Energy crisis in Pakistan

Energy Crisis in Pakistan
A general view.
01) Prefix
a) what is energy?
b) Producing resources of energy
c) Acute shortfall
02) Back-trail enigma
a) Starting days of the state
b) during middle age
c) crisis in near past
03) Current enigma
a) Domestic load-shedding
b) Industrial crisis
c) Massive transportation distrubances
04) possible future concerns/ conditions
a) Failed state conditions
b) Minimal economic conditions
c) General public problems
(i) Non-luxurious life
(ii)
05) Recommendation for betterment of this crucial enigma
a) Urgent building up of new dams
b) feasible up-gradation of existing dams
c) compilation of IPI gas pipeline
d) Buying energy from open market to eradicate the distrubance
c) Recovery of:-
(i) Coal from sindh
(ii) Gas from Balochistan's far flunge areas like Kohlu, Bolan, Pasni (where possibilties are assured)
d) taking all measures and schedules to reduce wastage of energy
06) Coclusion/ ( may i use "foot note")
a) Planning
b) Breaking down of begging bowl
b) Vision of a prosperious and well going country.
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brother dont write about middle ages and those solutions which are impossible to be implemented. reduce your outline to one page and repost it.
moreover, dont write headlines like non-luxrious life, crises in recent past etc. these arguments dont carry weight. so be precise and to the point. beating about the bush wont help
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thanking in tones dear. i will try again about it
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"jo pochta he wo 1 mint k lye bewaqoof bnta he jo ni pochta poori zindagi bewaqoof rehta he.....!)

LMAO . Hilarious but true !

Never give a new idea in the conclusion.Just conclude u're essay in the conclusion as the word implies. You have given a few headings in the conclusion not mentioned above in u're essay.This is what i learned from my teachers that never come up with something new in u're conclusion. It ain't a mistake, it's a blunder. Plus i felt that u're ideas are fine but u were unable to make a suitable outline- there is excessive use of bombastic words
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Is the outline compulsory?
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Is the outline compulsory?
Yes, it has been made compulsory. Go through CSS ESSAY 2011 and you will see at the top a Note _ Make an outline and write a comprehensive essay.
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i hv consulted with a friend, he is a csp told me that he wrote above 30 outlines and had 54nos in essay paper. mari and other seniors what u say about it.plz plz plz seniors tell me about it
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more outline result less marks. you should need to obtain 80 to 90 marks in essay for this purpose you should stress on both qulaity and quantity. because both matter if you have quantity but not quality you will gain 0.
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