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Critical analysis of education sysytems in pakistan.

Outline
1)introduction
.)education is sine qua non for socio economic and political development
.)education in pakistan
.)different tiers of education systems in pakistan
.)thesis statement leading to conclusion
2)education and islam
3)vision of founding father regarding education in pakistan
4)education systems in pakistan
.)elite class oriented school system
.)middle class private english medium school sysytem
.)state,s paralysied school system
.)madrassah school system(religious education system)
5) critical analysis of education systems in pakistan
1) elite class oriented school system
.)foreign education structure
.)least socio economic role in country,s development played by this system
.)braindrain
.)produces top political and civil military leadership
.) no reformative role played by this system in society
2)middle class private education system
.)fulfills gap in education system left by state school system.
.)lacked innovation and creativity
.)untrained pedagogy
.)this system produces mediocre class
3)public educatin system
.) dysfunctional education system
.)politicised education departement
.)missing facilities
.)visionless pedagogy
.)state,s utmost neglection
.)this system props up peons and clercks
.)old syllabus
4) madrassah school system
.)medieval concept of education
.)myopic and visionless teaching staff
.)ageold syllabus
.) system brings forth conservative maulivs not religious scholars
.) cures of terrorism is watered by this syatem.
6) corrective measures
.)state,s vibrant and genuine role in educationing the masses
.)education should be pritorized in allocation of funds
.)depoliticisation of education department
.)education regulatory body for all and sundry
.)trained and visionary teaching staff
.)fulfilling of missing facilities
7)conclusion
An over all view


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wao.....amazing....i am a new member.....really liked ur outlines.....it covered all things....can u tell me can we write essay in headings and sub headings as u hv given in outlines.....
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yeh u can write outline in this way
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what about essay....... i am talking about essay u will explain these outlines in essay by headings or by paragraphs....
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Dear rajasani
ur outlines seem to be excellent, i,e covering almost all areas, best of luck dear BUT what if we make outlines in a short sentences??
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prince u can write it . it depends upon ur vocab and essay mode. my essay was critical analysisi of education systems in pakistan so according to me some pointline are extended.in a nutshell it depends upon ur essay
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mano g i wana ur feedback on my outline that i explored in css 2012
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Critical analysis of education sysytems in pakistan.

Outline
1)introduction
.)education is sine qua non for socio economic and political development
.)education in pakistan
.)different tiers of education systems in pakistan
.)thesis statement leading to conclusion
2)education and islam
3)vision of founding father regarding education in pakistan
4)education systems in pakistan
.)elite class oriented school system
.)middle class private english medium school sysytem
.)state,s paralysied school system
.)madrassah school system(religious education system)
5) critical analysis of education systems in pakistan
1) elite class oriented school system
.)foreign education structure
.)least socio economic role in country,s development played by this system
.)braindrain
.)produces top political and civil military leadership
.) no reformative role played by this system in society
2)middle class private education system
.)fulfills gap in education system left by state school system.
.)lacked innovation and creativity
.)untrained pedagogy
.)this system produces mediocre class
3)public educatin system
.) dysfunctional education system
.)politicised education departement
.)missing facilities
.)visionless pedagogy
.)state,s utmost neglection
.)this system props up peons and clercks
.)old syllabus
4) madrassah school system
.)medieval concept of education
.)myopic and visionless teaching staff
.)ageold syllabus
.) system brings forth conservative maulivs not religious scholars
.) cures of terrorism is watered by this syatem.
6) corrective measures
.)state,s vibrant and genuine role in educationing the masses
.)education should be pritorized in allocation of funds
.)depoliticisation of education department
.)education regulatory body for all and sundry
.)trained and visionary teaching staff
.)fulfilling of missing facilities
7)conclusion
An over all view


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@Rajasani.

Your outlines are excellent and cover almost all aspects of the topic. But they would be more effective if they covered the following headings as well:

1. poor quality of education
2. limited access to education
3. lack of belief in education
4. insufficient funds reserved for education
5. bad governance and corruption
6. lack of coordination among different layers of the education system
7. feudalism
8. mismanagement and lack of planning.
and so on...

the outlines would be yet more effective if you collectively criticized all the systems. in other words, the question does not require a separate critical analysis of each of the systems because there are many more systems than the ones you mentioned.

this is my point of view. i may be wrong.

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Your outlines are not bad, try to make it better more with the extensive and effective outlines but to the point. You have written down well....
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bro essay was on education systems in pakistan i took it in general prespective. And generally above mentioned systems are working in pakistan.thanks for ur evaluation
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