Energy crisis of Pakistan

Introduction

What is energy
Sources of energy(hydral,nuclear,solar,biogas,tidal,wind e.t.c)
Conventional and non conventional sources of energy
Renewable and non renewable sources of energy

Situation of energy crisis in Pakistan
Shortfall of 5000 M.W
CNG ISSUE
Increase in Tariff of gas and electricity

Cause of energy crisis
Corruption in energy and power sector (corruption in rental power project)
Hydropower conflicts ( kalabagh dam 3600 mw)
Increase in demand
Lack of planning in power sector
Electricity theft and line losses
Appointment of lay man as federal minister for energy and power
Failure of institutions in power sector (wapda and kesc)
Mismanagement of resources
No construction new dams in last decade
allocation of meager amount in national budget for future energy projects
Consequences of energy crisis in Pakistan
Psychological impact on brain
Wastage of time
Unemployment
Flight of foreign investment
Economic impact
Loss in production
SUGESSTION AND REMEDIES TO OVERCOME ENERGY CRISIS
Audit of power sector by independent audit firm
Construction of new dams
Proper planning in future
Allocation of funds in national budget for future power and energy projects
Appointment of technical expert as federal minister for energy and power
EPILOGUE (CONCLUSION)

please rate my outline out of 10 comments are welcome

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Who put this thing together? Me, that's who! Who do I trust? Me!

It is nice and if you have provided necessary figures about shortfall of electricity and its demand in the country, then you can score good.

comments are welcomed

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Who put this thing together? Me, that's who! Who do I trust? Me!

that's interesting but improve a little bit dear...8/10

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It's nice work.


You are aboustly right,,, Reasons of shortfall of electricity and rising its demands are very important and to enhance your essay.

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Nasr bhai and other seniors members please comment

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You should include a section that bust the myths as well, there are talks of generating power from coal, it should be known that coal of pakistan is of poor quality and sophisticated technology (which is very expensive) needs to be imported to make it worth generating electricity

Also, construction of DAMs for electricity is very outdated, The prime purpose of a DAM was/is Never electricity generation, that's not something you should suggest in your essay as a solution, it is more of a problem rather than a solution, not only because of its political issues which can stir up chaos but in situation of a war it's a very high security risk, just 1 bomb at the right place and boooooooom off goes the city with flood.. However, small multiple dams are not a bad idea, not not big dams.. There was some research which spotted some 30+ areas I think which are naturally suited for small dams in pakistan

Divide your solution into 3 parts, short term solutions, mid term solutions and long term solutions. Then have subsections for them, Immediate solutions are RPP's and IPP's etc, do research for others (mid term, long term) :P

NOTE : I have not attempted CSS yet, so don't consider my comments very serious and obviously don't compare them to what seniors will tell you, just shared what I thought, I can be wrong

Good luck!

not bad but you need to improve a little bit.
too much has been said on these solutions.give some unique ideas to overcome the issue,if possible.i give 6 out of 10.

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initial part of the outline is irrelevant..you are nt supposed to provide info abt 'what is energy or energy crisis'
address the topic directly.
moreover,dont define you topic in intro,in intro provide the general info abt the situation of energy crisis in pak.
bro most of the people fail in essay coz of irrelevancy.

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