Originally Posted by Belal Jonaid
Which flaws do you see in the writer's English -- can you mention any specific examples please? Also, I'd like to know what exactly you meant by "apocalyptically written" since I didn't quite get that part.
Thanks in advance.
with india is not a word to be used as those who are rivals, they are rivals to each other ofcourse so we won't use mutual here, mere rivals would suffice...
second last line which says all crucial to defining the
...we won't use the gerund form here as preposition to
is always followed by a simple first form of verb...
apocalyptically written means that in written expression we need to bring brevity the paragraph must be written with proper context, to the point and connected with the context in the sentence or clause that precedes...ok dear...