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[Emaan zia]

Current scenario of Blasphemy and how to
cope with this?
Introduction
The upward surge is seen in commiting of Blasphemy..."Innocence of Muslims" and cartoons in French newspaper
Reasons for this undesirable increase:
1.intolerant attitude towards minorities in muslim countries
2.distorted image of Muslim Ummah at international level.ummah is no more role model for non Muslim
3.unresolved and uprising conflicts among Muslim countries
4.Lack of effective leadership at international level
5.international Muslim organizations e.g OIC,Arab Leauge have failed to safeguard muslim interests.
6.evil elements on the part of Christianity
7.Absolute freedom of expression ;an un brideled licence
8.No specific international laws prohibiting Blasphemy and disgusting remarks about religious faiths
Reaction of Muslims
1.violent protests in the whole islamic world
2.death of American ambassador in Libya and other hostilities towarda america
3.Strong condemnation by Muslim leaders
4.PBUH Day in Pakistan
Strategies to cope with the current scenario
1.Full religious liberty to minorities in Muslim countries....justice should be done to others if you want justice for youself
2.violent protests resulting harm to our own lives and properties, should be done away
3.measures to highlight the issue and its importance
4.Organized efforts by Muslim community
5.efforts for mutal trust between Muslim and Non Muslim world
6.There should be restriction on absolute freedom of expression but not on freedom of expression
7.need for international legislation to criminalise the act
8.Co-operation with sympathetic groups in non Muslim countries to prevent these evil acts
9.role of Muslims communities in Non Muslim countries
10.Media should play a responsible role
Pakistan's commendable role in the whole situation and human rights organization in Geneva
Critical analysis

[VetDoctor]

It seems a fine effort, but a little organisation of these points is needed, plus you can add role of religious political parties, poor economics conditions of the Muslim ummah (due to which we are always in need of financial support of western countries), propaganda of western media against Islam and Muslims.
You mentioned evil elements in Christianity, but i suggest that don't mention the name of any religion.