Please Evaluate my outline critically
 

Please Evaluate my outline critically. i am confused whether Causes and Impacts are ok or i need to reorganize. Also let me know should i add some more points??? your quick response shall be highly appreciated.
[B]
Economic Crisis of Pakistan[/B]
1. [B]Introduction[/B]
2. [B]Historical perspective[/B]
3. [B]Causes of Economic Crisis[/B]
(a) Informal Economy
(b) Mismanagement of Economy
(c) Excessive Government Borrowing.
(d) Tax Evasion
(e) State Bank of Pakistan Policies
(f) Lack of agricultural research
(g) Corruption
(h) Rampant Smuggling
(i) No Agricultural Reforms
(j) Lack of hones Leadership
(k) Political Instability
(l) Energy Crisis.
(m) Socio cultural attitude
(n) Lack of Female Labour participation
(o) Feudalism
(p) Population Explosion
(q) Natural calamities
(r) Terrorism on terrorism
4.[B] Impacts of Economic Crisis[/B]
(a) Flight of Foreign direct investment
(b) Deteriorating Image of the Country
(c) Food insecurity
(d) Decline in GDP Growth
(e) Tourism Industry badly affected
(f) Inflation
(g) Trade deficit
(h) Poor growth rate
(i) Deteriorating agriculture sector
(j) Closure of Industries
(k) Failure of Trade Policy
(l) Unemployment
(m) Poverty
(n) Flight of local industrialists
5. [B]Suggestion[/B]
6. [B]Conclusion[/B]

That,s a nice effort but according to my unschooled eyes, the essay topic can never be so open, like economic crises of Pakistan.I mean it can be a part of topic like Hurdles Pakistan facing domestically or globally.
Secondly, being a student of economics I feel causes order must be changed. The informal economy is not a leading cause of economic crises of Pakistan. You are missing Impact of Global Economic crises, Imbalance in BOP, Privitisation and nationalisation polices of government, currency depreciation, International aid compulsions, stagflation. technological backwardness and many more.

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Secondly, being a student of economics I feel causes order must be changed. The informal economy is not a leading cause of economic crises of Pakistan. You are missing Impact of Global Economic crises, Imbalance in BOP, Privitisation and nationalisation polices of government, currency depreciation, International aid compulsions, stagflation. technological backwardness .[/QUOTE]

are these causes of impacts? if these are impact then Global Economic should be one of he cause which is hampering our economic growth...is not it?? secondly,
let me know one thing that If the topic is Hurdles Pakistan facing domestically or globally then what should i have to write???

[QUOTE=seher bano;516939]are these causes of impacts? if these are impact then Global Economic should be one of he cause which is hampering our economic growth...is not it?? secondly,
let me know one thing that If the topic is Hurdles Pakistan facing domestically or globally then what should i have to write???[/QUOTE]

My typing skills are not good, so pardon me for that.

These are the causes, the word impact here means the impact of global economic crises as a cause of pak economic crises, and so on.
Hurdles can be many like social,economic,political,administrative etc economic we have discussed above
political can be Political instability, personality politics, leadership crises, undue military interferance ,week democracy, no rule of law, ineffective foreign policy, diplomatic failure etc
social can be xenophobic tendencies of people, moral decay, alienation from religion, and many other social ills of society
administrative can be lack of accountability, afsarshahi, corruption, red tapism and many more
global can be geostrategic position of pak, neo grt game and paks role, war on terrorism, foriegn interferance etc

[QUOTE=ravian786;516944]My typing skills are not good, so pardon me for that.

These are the causes, the word impact here means the impact of global economic crises as a cause of pak economic crises, and so on.
Hurdles can be many like social,economic,political,administrative etc economic we have discussed above
political can be Political instability, personality politics, leadership crises, undue military interferance ,week democracy, no rule of law, ineffective foreign policy, diplomatic failure etc
social can be xenophobic tendencies of people, moral decay, alienation from religion, and many other social ills of society
administrative can be lack of accountability, afsarshahi, corruption, red tapism and many more
global can be geostrategic position of pak, neo grt game and paks role, war on terrorism, foriegn interferance etc[/QUOTE]

Check this outline. i have reorganized it and included some more points. now let me know what flaws are still in it.

[B]Economic Crisis of Pakistan[/B]

1. [B]Introduction[/B]
2. [B]Historical perspective[/B]
3. [B]Causes of Economic Crisis[/B]
(a) Energy Crisis.
(b) Natural calamities
(c) Corruption
(d) Excessive Government Borrowing.
(e) Tax Evasion
(f) No Agricultural Reforms
(g) Political Instability
(h) Lack of honest Leadership
(i) Population Explosion
(j) External Factors
(k) War on Terrorism
(l) Lack of agricultural research
(m) Rampant Smuggling
(n) Mismanagement of Economy
(o) Lack of Female Labour participation
(p) State Bank of Pakistan Policies
(q) Informal Economy
(r) Socio cultural attitude
(s) Feudalism
4. [B]Impacts of Economic Crisis[/B]
(a) Unemployment
(b) Inflation
(c) Poverty
(d) Flight of Foreign direct investment
(e) Flight of local industrialists
(f) Poor Growth rate
(g) Trade deficit
(h) Poor growth rate
(i) Deteriorating agriculture sector
(j) Closure of Industries
(k) Failure of Trade Policies
(l) Depletion of Foreign reserves
(m) External debt and liabilities
(n) Tourism Industry badly affected
(o) Food insecurity
(p) Deteriorating Image of the Country
5. [B]Steps taken by Current Government[/B]
(a) Tax policy measures
(b) Development of a vibrant debt market
(c) Tight Monetary policy
(d) National Transport Policy
(e) overseas employment
6. [B]Way forward[/B]
(a) To overcome the energy crisis
(b) More budget for public-sector development
(c) increase in tax collection
(d) To wage war against corruption
(e) consistency in policies
(f) Economic growth
(g) International Financial institutions
(h) To reduce foreign debt burden
(i) To discourage overall grey economy
(j) Research and effective policies
(k) To revive the Tourism industry
(l) index the rate of return with the inflation
(m) technical education of farmers
7. [B]Conclusion[/B]

this one is better :)

[QUOTE=ravian786;517132]this one is better :)[/QUOTE]

Ok thanks....one thing i want to ask:

1. What is a difference between Government Borrowing and Public debt?
2. What is a difference between Budget deficit and debt financing?
3. Difference between balance of payment and BOT?
4. also difference between government borrowing and foreign debt?

confirm it please.