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Urbanisation
Post-Industrial phenomenon causing mass migration from rural to urban swathes with relative outcome of over-populated cities.
INTRODUCTION
a) Historical Evolution
b) Socio-cultural perspective
c) Core vs peripheral division
CAUSES OF URBANISATION
1) Economic front.
2) Educational dimension
3) Unequal distribution of resources
4) Lack of infrastructure
5) Scarcity of basic necessities of life
6) Vulnerabilities of rural areas
7) Political Causes
8) Random Causes
MERITS OF URBANISATION
= Economic Driver
= Social Benefits
= Sense of Security
= Remittances to Rural Areas
= Adequate provision of basic necessities
= Diversity in Culture
= Foundation and launching pad for change
CONSEQUENCES OF URBANISATION
+ Over Population
+ Poor Law and Order System
+ Systematic Rise in Inequality
+ Cultural,Ethnic Politicisation
+ Materialistic and Immoral attitude
+ Psychological Disorders
+ Industrialisation
+ Pollution
How to tackle it?
- Removing multi-dimensional disparities between Rural and Urban life
- Availability of shelter
- Use of excellent architecture
- Political measures (Local Bodies Government, devolution etc)
- Establishment of Agri-business or Agri-Industry in rural areas
- Provision of adequate justice to the door step
CONCLUSION.


I'll be highly grateful for kind suggestions and comments pinpointing my mistakes, if any.
Thank You.

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[QUOTE=hassamniazi;518431]Urbanisation
Post-Industrial phenomenon causing mass migration from rural to urban swathes with relative outcome of over-populated cities.
INTRODUCTION
a) Historical Evolution
b) Socio-cultural perspective
c) Core vs peripheral division
CAUSES OF URBANISATION
1) Economic front.
2) Educational dimension
3) Unequal distribution of resources
4) Lack of infrastructure
5) Scarcity of basic necessities of life
6) Vulnerabilities of rural areas
7) Political Causes
8) Random Causes
MERITS OF URBANISATION
= Economic Driver
= Social Benefits
= Sense of Security
= Remittances to Rural Areas
= Adequate provision of basic necessities
= Diversity in Culture
= Foundation and launching pad for change
CONSEQUENCES OF URBANISATION
+ Over Population
+ Poor Law and Order System
+ Systematic Rise in Inequality
+ Cultural,Ethnic Politicisation
+ Materialistic and Immoral attitude
+ Psychological Disorders
+ Industrialisation
+ Pollution
How to tackle it?
- Removing multi-dimensional disparities between Rural and Urban life
- Availability of shelter
- Use of excellent architecture
- Political measures (Local Bodies Government, devolution etc)
- Establishment of Agri-business or Agri-Industry in rural areas
- Provision of adequate justice to the door step
CONCLUSION.


I'll be highly grateful for kind suggestions and comments pinpointing my mistakes, if any.
Thank You.[/QUOTE]
Outline covered all aspects,Superb work !:dd I want to add certain points under consequences heading: "There might be certain economical impacts of urbanisation like Inflation,cheap labor( due to extensive avalibility of man force),competition etc "

Yes you are right . I should incorporate these points ..
What about opening sentence ..?