please review my outlines.........and comments on it.
 

Pakistani women: Rights, Responsibilities and challenges:
Outlines:
1. Introduction:
a) the status of women in society
2. Changing role of women
3. Pakistani women
a) rural uneducated women
b) rural middle class women
c) rural Elite class women
d) business &working class women
4. Rights:
a) Rights of women in Islam
b) Rights of women in constitution
5. Responsibilities in the shaking family system of our society.
a) building family
b) building future generation
c) building a nation
6. Challenges:
a) To counter the new westernize role
b) to determine against the cruel social norms
c) women empowerment and independence
d) To counter the glamorous role imposed.
7. conclusion: