pakistan a banana state
 

In pakistan it is very easy to win election's by corrupt,fake degree holders and tax thieves to became a parlimenterian.hence, anyone can become PM only he should have the qualities which mentioned above.this is i should say pakistani people and our failure that they bacame our masters of fate.

now a days pakistan is rules by ppp whom's co-chairman is president of pakistan and who is called as mr.10% in the whole world. there has been alot of events or i should say affairs that i could write here to prove my stance, but i am very confused that from where i should start.

pakistan is a banana state because any country can voilate our sovereignty and cross our borders.they can come and they can do anything they want. may 2 2011 is the shameless example is front of us.americans came and voialted our sovereignty and killed ussama bin laden and went back and than there were no answerable to public.

zardari and his culprit group is looting pakistan with both hands but no one is here to answer.former PM gillani appointed a metric failed person tauqeer sadiq as chairman of OGRA which is pakistan's most benifitial institution and he also looted 80 billion rupees from OGRA and no one can even question to culprit gillani why he put on such useless person on such great institution

there is no law and order in country everyday there is a lot of death bodies to collect and no one is even sad about them the whole country is burning voialnce is everywhere in the whole country.

there is only one solution left that is free and fair elections

may ALLAH bless pakistan with great and sincere leaders.

plzz share your ideas with me i am really confused plz seniors let me know how i could write better as i know this is not good...:(

[QUOTE=kashifaslamj;562919]In pakistan it is very easy to win election's by corrupt,fake degree holders and tax thieves to became a parlimenterian.hence, anyone can become PM only he should have the qualities which mentioned above.this is i should say pakistani people and our failure that they bacame our masters of fate.

now a days pakistan is rules by ppp whom's co-chairman is president of pakistan and who is called as mr.10% in the whole world. there has been alot of events or i should say affairs that i could write here to prove my stance, but i am very confused that from where i should start.

pakistan is a banana state because any country can voilate our sovereignty and cross our borders.they can come and they can do anything they want. may 2 2011 is the shameless example is front of us.americans came and voialted our sovereignty and killed ussama bin laden and went back and than there were no answerable to public.

zardari and his culprit group is looting pakistan with both hands but no one is here to answer.former PM gillani appointed a metric failed person tauqeer sadiq as chairman of OGRA which is pakistan's most benifitial institution and he also looted 80 billion rupees from OGRA and no one can even question to culprit gillani why he put on such useless person on such great institution

there is no law and order in country everyday there is a lot of death bodies to collect and no one is even sad about them the whole country is burning voialnce is everywhere in the whole country.

there is only one solution left that is free and fair elections

may ALLAH bless pakistan with great and sincere leaders.[/QUOTE]

I would like you to please show some respect for your country, It is not a Banana State, though we are running through a tough phase yet the hopes are there, our moral is high, we are here to defeat each and every conspiracy that is to make Pakistan God-forbid look like a banana state, The things you've mentioned, every one knows, but i must say that even Pakistan has lot of threat in the form of unbridled corruption, terrorism, extremism and on the top of that an inefficient management too, but still Pakistan is there, it is being progressing, Students from Pakistan are setting world records, Players of Pakistan have beaten the world class teams, Engineers and doctors of Pakistan are supposed to be the best ones in the whole world, Pakistan army has been declared 1st in the event amongst 70 British and 16 teams from other countries of the world including USA, Germany, France, Canada and India etc. in 2010, It is Pakistan which has produced the talent like Arfa Karim, Ali Moeen, Atif aslam, nevertheless having all those threats, it never stopped progressing, it would keep running faster then earlier Insha ALLAH that is my belief, be optimistic, pray for you country rather, don't loose hope, our days will come, we, the muslims, have ruled the spain, we will rule the world again, Insha ALLAH.

balanced debate
 

good approach ! Excellent.u r heither to fit to be a good journalist rather than a good css aspirant.such critical thinking must be followed by a balanced debate under the auspice of both,positive and negative effects of the policy.u r absolutely correct,but hereby u should not ignore some praise worthy steps of this democratic govt i.e. 18 amendmnt,women's political empowerment etc.the phrase"pakistan as a banana state"is also ridiculous.however,ur libral education will certainly lead u towards good percetage of marks in the css.that's all.the rest follow the seniours' advice.best of luck !

@ mr noattitude..

thanx bro your comments are really benificial for me i really respect your arguments. can u plz tell me how was my approach of writing.and thanx again for gauiding me.